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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow this is a great story i cant wait to read more of this.
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. The pairings are awesome. Can't wait to see what happens at the world tournament. Update soon.
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February 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love your story update soon hope your grandmother is alright
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool. i love your story so much that im printing all your chaps out. oh, by the way, "spegetti" is spelled "spagetti", and "Shesshomuru" is spelled "Sesshomaru". I mean you no offense, though.
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. please continue? but I think you should change the title to 'kagome and hiei sitting in a tree K_I_S_S_I_N_G.' but If you need any help turn to me... oh yeah Get/Feel Better soon!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree 100% with the last reviewer. Your work is cute and creative but there NEEDS to be spacing added (broken up into paragraphs, dialogue, ect.) The author's notes splashed into the story seem very invasive and are not really needed. Obtaining a beta is a good suggestion that I would also suggest you seek out.
This is not a flame by any means, for a first story it is rather good, but constructive criticism is a helpful tool.
Just to note: adding chapters to other people's stories is not cool. I guarantee what you added to 'Fire and Ice' will just serve to annoy the author and will be probably be removed when he/or she sees it. You wouldn't want them to do that to yours without permission would you? :)
Anywho, great job so far. Keep updating:)
This is not a flame by any means, for a first story it is rather good, but constructive criticism is a helpful tool.
Just to note: adding chapters to other people's stories is not cool. I guarantee what you added to 'Fire and Ice' will just serve to annoy the author and will be probably be removed when he/or she sees it. You wouldn't want them to do that to yours without permission would you? :)
Anywho, great job so far. Keep updating:)
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
babe this chappie was not boring. i thought it was a very touching family moment and that Hiei is falling fast and hard! You rock! hope you feel bettersoon and i hope your gma is feeling better.peace
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! i wanna cry it is soo sweet and soo funny. you did really well. i thank you for the thanks you didn't have to but you did. i hope you continue to post more chaps and i hope you get better. peace
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is so good! Why did you stop? come on!
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i fully enjoyed this......can't wait for the next chappie. you have a really broad imagination and it shows in how youwork with each character. i hope you write more stories they rock!