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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice story so far. Hope to see more soon.
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok update and try and make the chapters longer! And Inu/Sippo action right.......
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is good so far as I only read to chap 2, and I'll keep reading.
By the way the dragon youkai's name is Ryukotsusei. Just thought you oughtta know
By the way the dragon youkai's name is Ryukotsusei. Just thought you oughtta know
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for explaining better what powers do have Shippo.
Now I think Sesshoumaru is surprised by the efficiency and speed of thought (sorry, don't know how to say it in English, 'rapidez de pensamiento') of both Inuyasha and Shippo.
I liked this chapter too.
Bye!
Now I think Sesshoumaru is surprised by the efficiency and speed of thought (sorry, don't know how to say it in English, 'rapidez de pensamiento') of both Inuyasha and Shippo.
I liked this chapter too.
Bye!
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH I can not wait until you update this!!
This is the most original INU/SHIP fic I have ever come across!!
Love it Love it Love it!
This is the most original INU/SHIP fic I have ever come across!!
Love it Love it Love it!
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oi, i wasn't to pleased with the length or topic of the last chappy but it seems like u've got a good foundation settled for later chapters.
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story, even if it is a little fast developing and might be a litte confusing because of it
inu is mature (sqeeeelll) but why is shippo so shy? and i like nice shesso, but why war? poor kirara, will she be all alone now?
will shesso have a mate too or stay single in the story?
hope the next chapter will come out soon, by by and bood luck with your muse
inu is mature (sqeeeelll) but why is shippo so shy? and i like nice shesso, but why war? poor kirara, will she be all alone now?
will shesso have a mate too or stay single in the story?
hope the next chapter will come out soon, by by and bood luck with your muse
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome story. I love it, although I do wish the chapters were longer quality is better then quanity(sp?). Please continue ^_^
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK, I like the story. Perhaps you should explaina bit what powrers have exactly developed Shippo. I suppose that transforning in a cute big flying ball will not be very useful in battle. And, since you said he was a master. It would be nice if he had increased his magical skills.
Sorry for the pathetic English, and I want to make clearthat I certainly believe this story to be great, I only wanted to ask you for a little more information. Hope you don't be mad at me, I like the way you describe things, it is clear and not confusing for a non-English speaker as me.
Thanks for your attention.
VenusOfHeaven
Sorry for the pathetic English, and I want to make clearthat I certainly believe this story to be great, I only wanted to ask you for a little more information. Hope you don't be mad at me, I like the way you describe things, it is clear and not confusing for a non-English speaker as me.
Thanks for your attention.
VenusOfHeaven
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really excited to know the rest so please continue. Everything else you have written so far has kept me on edge. MORE!MORE!MORE!