rate_review Reviews

you know how much i love this story? Really. It's probably my favorite, a changed Miko being the next closest. I've said it before, i love this pairing. I don't care what people say, teenage Koenma is a babe when he drops the pacifier. And Hiei, he's always hot. I'm glad to see you reposting it. *Hands you Hiei cookies* Please update this story soon, I can't wait to read the next chapters.

I like this story & can't wait for the rest to be reposted. 2 things; you have watched on in a couple of places, it should be either plain watched or looked on instead of watched on; the other is binds it should be bonds, bindings may work in some cases but I think bonds fits best in the sentence where binds is used. I hope this helps & isn't annoying.

I love this story purely for the out-there-ness of it. Koenma actually playing a more major role in this story makes me happy! ^_^ Update soon, ne?

what happen to the other chapter?
i love this story and the pairing couples.
update soon please