rate_review Reviews

Wow..I like it. Good job!

Good sweet lord, that was probably the hottest lemon I've read in a damn long time. You have a very original way with erotic description, with hardly any use of clichés you build almost painful tension. It was so hot, it was almost dark. Mmm...yes, yes and yes! I'd love more of this, but as a one-shot, it was 'holy-crap-give-me-a-fan-now' steamy!!!!

Ah, just beeeaauutiful! The lemons are so hot had I been just a few decades older I'd have a heart attack just by reading. Pardon my mistake, but it seems as if this is not finished. I'm not saying that you have to make a sequel (though I would like to beg of you. Please, please, please more Inu/Kago goodness in the stream/hot spring and definitely more in her time where our horny puppy discover the use of shower head, mirror and occasional porn Higurashi grandpa may have had hidden :) *grin shamelessly*), but if you decide to leave it as it is, you should wrap it up a bit better. Maybe giving Kagome a few spoken words would be good. Those are just my humble suggestions and request (sequel, sequel, sequel...OK, I'll stop pestering you now) and so, great job with this wonderful and delicious lemon!!
ps: what does HJ mean?