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for Don't make a sound

by inuyoukai8

person KawaiiKoneko89
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That wa sooooo good I loved the lemons it was so lemony...hmmm Sessho...sexy
person inugirl2003
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kinky! I love it, more more!!!!
person chubbers
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ha ha ha this was great! kagome was one lucky lady!
person Blayze
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kickass. Hope there's more chapters. :D
person InuGrrrl
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VERY Good, I liked it alot.
person smileyjones
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very different from the timid, shy, virginal Inuyasha in most fics. One of the best PWP I've read. My only complaint is that you need another chapter with the bath scene. I'm not saying to make this a long fic because PWP a better kept short but I more chapter will bring conclusion to the bath suggestion that you mentioned in the fic. Love your work and hope I get to read more for this fic.
person JBella
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. That was a really well-written lemon. Were you planning on making this a full-length fic? I'm kinda interested in seeing how everyone reacts, from that "dead bone teapot" to that "damn gay ass wolf"!
person Rawben
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
niiiice. what's w/ the oneshots? ...cause ...they're great. damn! ;)
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. 'Nough said.
person Anon
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was defintely good, hope it continues, i wonder how kagome will react if she finds out about the other woman, not a good thing for inuyasha lol, those beads sure do come in handy