rate_review Reviews

wow! absolutely amazing!
though the part with John Wolfe made me think there was gonna be more to him then just an obsession
either way, i loved your story.
great job =)!

Okay seriously I LOVE THIS STORY!! gigantic chapter CLAP CLAP CLAP and such a sweet story too!! I love the daughter idea, cause most people tend to have the baby birthed and then end the story, this time you started off with the kid, which was cool. so props to you and your story, and I wouldn't mind if it continued *rolls eyes inocently* TOOTLES

Ready kids? One, Two, Three: Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Bit creepy, though, with the whole mother/father sex scene not long after the daughter/future-son thing.

heh, so there's a hapless hojo in every generation? that was a nice touch. overall very well done, i'm a sucker for romantic stories like these :p

But it seems like you made a few grammar errors regarding the four souls of the shikon no tama...

Three out of the four were spelled wrong:

sakimetama = While it should have been "Sakimitama"

kushimetama = While it should have been "Kushimitama"

megimetama = While it should have been "Megimitama"

I don't know if the characters were right on who possesed which of them, since it's been ages since i've seen the episode it was explained in, so i won't say anything about that.

This is not a flame, i just spotted some errors that's all.

Here is a link to an encyclopedia about the shikon no tama, it is also a great source of other kinds of info as well, most of the stuff i use now a days came from this site, i recommend it:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Main_Page

Just type anything you want into the search bar, be it about Inuyasha or anything else, anime or something else, you'll find it.

That was a REALLY GOOD Story...*slightly speechless* I mean WOW!
And I loved the plot and the pairing it was just toooo Cute.
Anyway do you think you can add an extra chappie...PLEASE.
Just like having her go to the prom with Shippo, and Shippo beating up John Wolfe for flirting with Inu...
hee hee... Ja Ne!
Shadow Raven

P.S. Please write second chappie! PLEASE! ^.^ *bows to authoress* PlizPlizPlizPliz...

Damn!! THIS WAS A GOOD A STORY! id there more? Well i hope there is UPDATE SOON OK

A.S.A.P

thanks,

~Dream girl

Oh my, this was pretty damn good! Wow, that's all i can say... i especially like this because it reminds me so much of my own story, "Loneliness of the Free Wind", a long one-shot story.

I also like how you didn't do one of the basic mistakes that many people make when they write about the possible son/daughter between Inuyasha and Kagome, so many authors always describe the children as 'hanyou' which means half demon... how can a half-demon produce another half-demon? If it was with a Youkai, then it would be understandable but with a human?

I like how you didn't do that mistake, but instead labelled their daughter as a 'quarter Youkai', which is the accurate thing to do, since half out of half leaves a quarter right? Hehehe... so good you noticed that, you get big plus points from me because of that.

Anyway, this story was pretty damn good, i've also sent you an Email, hope to hear from you soon again!