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by inuyoukai8

person Mellissa
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I went back and read the last chapter to 'Across the Ages' (and hey, 'Chronicles' now has 64 chapters too!)to see which kids have shown up so far. Lets see:

Inu/Kags: Sataru, Shippo, and Kagura have made an appearance. But no Saio, Taima, Tohma, or Souta yet.

Sess/Ayeka: Toga, Ryu, and Taisha, But no Tohru (you said Sessy favored her, I wanna see some Tohru! lol)

Sango and Miroku had 8 kids?! Wow, that must mean a heck of a lotta grandkids. I think that may be a couple of characters too many:)

Lets bring everyone of the inu kids in and let this story live forever! Come on! There's some pudding pops in there for ya! Everyone loves puddin' pops lol:)
person Serena
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Taisha and Kumara are very cute together, I'm glad they are working through their relationship. The new creature of Allister is pretty scary (I'm beginning to agree with the Naraku theory). Great job as always, still my fav:)
person Serena
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Arg, so much work and school is driving me crazy! I didn't even get a chance to read the last couple of updates, I was sorely in need of my Toga fix. Okay, so I have NO idea who the mole could be, but I'm really excited to see who it is. I'm also glad there was a little Ippiku humor, I missed him (I think he's my fav:P ). His little bits of comic relief make me laugh each time I read a piece with him in it.

You know? Toga keeps digging himself bigger and bigger holes doesn't he? That boy seriously needs to stop getting into such situations. I love how all the girls love Sesshomaru, who wouldn't? I think his tough love for Toga is the right approach to take. As for the Kurama, I wonder what Sataru is going to do to him. It kinda makes me laugh just thinking about it. He has a very Sessshomaru way of dealing with things. Passive aggresive and hilarious.

BTW, you should just let this story go on forever. I certainly wouldn't mind one bit. Okay, I'll stop babbling now:)
person Style
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Who will be that "who"...? Don't tell me is him "N"!! I am wondering what Ayeka would think about her daughter, her past and that Fox? Interesting....
person Anon
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol saturo has such bad timing, they way kurama references taisha reminding him of sessh you'd almost think he had a crush on sessh lol Hmm i wonder how sessh will take a taisha/kurama romance, i really hope that comes up in the next update. ;)
person Rawben
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww! yey for lemons!!! so cute!! and great chapters! the ship/d one was perfect!
i'm still upset about the lil fox demon. poor wittle guy.
person Style
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are back. I don't mind this story is no ending. There are many interesting stuffs that you just created....Just want to kill that bastard.
person Anon
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww that was sweet between daishi and shippo, haha so i wonder if madu and elda will survive the two day trip. Great update, no more taking time off to figure out plot lines, the plot lines can figure themselves out, i just need a consistent everday update is that so much to ask lol
-cherrycolachick
person Mr. Shiznit
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am still waiting for an update, asap
person Mellissa
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, where's my update??! I dont wanna wait any longer. :P