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Wait for long time......update update soon.....plz
I miss all of them

hey what happened? where did you go, what happened to the consistent little updater i know and love :(, i need an update fix like a crack addict needs crack, GIMME GIMME GIMME!!!!

Hooray Hooray, we should have a parade, this moment has taken approximately 109 chapters for toga and aislin to get it on and become mates. Toga was so sweet , awww , me loves toga bunches and bunches lol. Poor kurama though hopefully taisha will wise up before she has to go do the chasing. Hey are madu and the wolfess going to get their moment too? Update Update :), does this story still have a lot more ahead :), or is it coming to a close :(. If it is, whats your next project going to be? cause im anxiously awaiting lol :)

That was great.. i luved the last two chapters (u posted 107 twice) the wedding/mating was wonderful and i laughed how when she blurted it out... also there was one spelling error i did catch "keening dry." ...i'm guessing you meant cry.. no biggie...just thought u might like to know..i want to know when you're bringing taima back huh? update soon

Hi
I just finshed your story , and it was just wounderful you have an incrediable talent.
I hope you don't leave us hanging to long on what happens with Kurama.
And what is the name of your book and when and where can i get it, thanks alot for giving us something so good to read wickitraven

I find amazing how you're able to renew your descriptions of lovemaking, feelings, sex... Soooo gooood !!!!!
BRAVO !

Merely Truth

Technical merit - top notch.

Creative merit - I was a little disappointed with this chapter. After all the wait for this emotional as well as physical consummation to take place, it felt a little anti-climatic.

No, I don't dwell much about the physical side of things, (we all know you are very imaginative and very descriptively thorough in that department with the other couples).

It was just that I thought there would have been more emotions, more feelings expressed at the sacredness of this union, at their joy of finally being able to be together. For goodness sakes, it was a marriage witnessed by the upper crust of the demon clan and more importantly, they had gone through too much to be so shortchanged.

It was as if you ran out of things to say when it came to this part. I felt it was kind of ...(I'm sorry...) ...flat....I thought this chapter did them an injustice to their character depth.

well taima might not be as dead as once thought, thats good and im over my cold yippi. Its pretty funny that kurama suffers the same woman troubles as sesshoumaru once did, divine justice. OMG the funniest part was amari and shessh youngest daughter cutting his hair, and the things that inuyasha and sessh thougt was going on lol. Amari's great, i wasn't really that fascinated by his character when he first appeared but he has defintely grown on me with his sweetness. And finally ippiku makes an appearance again. update update hurry hurry, oh and by the way are you going to finish your hellsing fic or have you abandoned it? I actually went out and bought the first hellsing dvd that has the first 3 episodes. A little to violent for my taste but I definitely see the alucard attraction :)

I so luv your story and am VERY relieved you're still updating.. took me awhile to find the story again though.. the last couple chapters had me crying..poor taima that was so sad......please update soon... i want more.. i need more..i gotta know how it ends..

omg! so sad!! ::cries:: that ...oh. wow. ::sniffle:: great job. great bad guy. ;)