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wow I haven't reviewed in almost a month, I sorries :(, finally madu and elda consumate their relationship, I think that makes it full circle doesn't it. Poor taisha I felt bad for her, she was so depressed, I wish kurama was actually on this show :(, since this is about the only anime show I watch besides samurai champloo. I hope this isn't the end, I want more toga and aislin afterall this fic is about them ;). Keep up the good work!!!!

Mind Blowing...

Wow. Chapter 5 {Yes, I am a terribly slow reader! Everytime I go to park my bum in front of the computer and read... someone interupts me *doh!*} That was AWESOME. So Aislin finds out Toga isn't human... that was so damned touching... especially the way she brushed her lips over his fang *swoons* This chapter brought back flashbacks of Rin,Sesshoumaru and Jaken. Ippiku reminds me sooo much like Jaken (only not as ugly... I envision him somewhat like a faerie yeah?) Excellent stuff... only, I'm still confused. Who is Toga's mum again? She's human yeah? See? This is the crap you have to put up with when you can't sit down and read more than one or two chapters at a time every few days or so! It drives me crazy! That and my bloody short-term memory loss *rolls eyes in frustration* k... either you haven't revealed Togas mum (which I'm sure you haven't) or I've had a complete and utter brain fart and am going to have to try to re-read the first few chapters again and find out.... I'll hang in there a few chapters more just in case cos if I go back to read the first few chapters, I'll never get this finished! Touching stuff chickybabe... ~_^

He kissed her!!! *starry eyes!* Wows!!!! This sux! I have to crash now and the story is starting to take off on me! Sleep beckons... must go... sweet dreams for me ~_^

Ok Sinner, since you've been gone a while :) Welcome back by the way....This is the continuation of Across the Ages. Ayeka is Toga's mum. And Yeah Ippiku is like a little grizzled blue fairy with icicles on his nose. By the way the very latest installment is dedicated to you for your long endured suffering of not being here for a while and for putting up with Superbitch :)

Where have I been? I'm so happy to have found this story once again... I remember being confused when I first started reading this, cos I couldn't work out if Toga was Sesshoumaru's dad or son in this story... As it was, I ended up losing track of it when I gave my computer to my idiot ex, so I am really glad to have found it again ^_~... Nuh-uh... after reading the lemon for the second time in Chapter 3, I think it's safe to say that glad is an UNDERSTATEMENT. These naughty puppies... geez I don't know *squirms in seat, crossing and uncrossing legs profusely* Lucky wolf.... What can I say? Top lemon my hentai'd friend and I'm sure that there's a stack more *grins deviously* And I do like the way this story is flowing. I love how you've got Toga such a hard nut with a soft spot. Kind of reminds me of Sesshoumaru almost. And his little blind ward... that was cool. I can't wait to see what part she plays in all of this. Wows... it's been quite some time since I've actually got sucked into a story like this one. I also like how you've got it that Toga's mum was Irish (yay the Irish being an Irish Australian myself ^_^)... It makes for a very interesting story. K... I'm hooked. Hopefully I'll be able to park my arse in front of the computer a bit more than I have been able to lately and actually READ IT! What a happy lil vegemite am I to see that I've got a stack of chapters yet to go... Must find my way to a cold shower now me thinks... the man of my life ain't due home for another 30 minutes *Mental Note to me: Do not read your lemons unless the outlet for my lemon induced frustration is HOME!*

Peace Sweetpea,

The Sinner ~_^

Ohssss..... Toga is such a gallant, chivalrous gentleman *swoons*... His character is developing nicely. What a lucky girl Aislin is to have him as her protector *swoons again* I loved how you put it at the end of chapter four how in his fathers kingdom, children were allowed to be children. To grow up at the pace they're meant to... *sighs wistfully* It'd be nice wouldn't it?

Peace inuyoukai8

The Sinner ~_^

Oh yay I am glad to see the updates. I loved them. Was cool that taisha became a thief.. even for a short time.. please update soon.

Marvelous ! So romantic, I love that a lot ! Two alphas together, big challenge !!! Very good idea. Please, develop the thought of Taisha during her "submission" to Kurama and their lovemaking : she murmured something, felt something, she cried, and that's all. (my hentai side was a little desappointed...)

And thank you very much : you think of us, poor waiting readers ...!!! Sure, I imagined horrible things in your life making you unable to update. Arghhhh ! Give us some news, please.

Being french, I assure you I don't find a lot of mistakes in your writing, only some. In all the fics I read on AFF, there are always the same mistakes that appear : confusion between its and it's (a lot !!!), between here, hear and her (once ! ) or they're and their (raahhhh !, even to and too (pffff.....!), and some lack of subject in the sentence... The fault of the computer automatic correction, surely...... Just one point here : the last sentence : "and that his crown he had willing lay at her feet." I'm puzzled, would had writed : "and that he had willingly laid his crown at her feet." What do you thing about ???

But as I said, I'm French and can't be too affirmative in a foreign language...
Nevertheless, I assure you that it's a true pleasure to read your fantastic, wonderful, entertaining, gut clenching (did I say wonderful ?) story as it is ! Don't loose courage !
Bravo, à bientôt !

Merely Truth

Oh my... *falls off chair ~_^* How could i forget this story?!! Obviously spent too much time off AFF and lost track of this scrumptious little number... Give us a sec to recollect myself... *hot, hot, hot* K... must go cool off now... be back soon for more.

Peace

Sinner