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for Chronicles of the West

by inuyoukai8

person Rawben
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
blind?? aww!!! man!!! poor girl!!
person Alex
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, the strange thing is when i was thinking of this story and Toga, and someone he should be paired with I came up somehow with a strawberry hair, gray-eyed girl, but what really creeped me out was that i thought of her to be blind. So strange that you wrote the character Aislin to be blind and I thought of the same exact thing i was going to comment you on, as a suggestion. Well, overall i love it, and I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!
person Style
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When Across the ages was ended, I was sad. Yeah!!! now the story is back. I like it.
person cherrIChaos
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
greeattt work!! i love how you're doing a continuation for Across the Ages. keep it up =)
person Me
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gotta love Toga. I'm so glad you are continuing with this story. I can't wait until it really begins to pick up.
person alix
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. Next time though could you put some spaces into your summary warnings or whatever they are. Have to scroll left/right to read the summary of all the stories on the page now. Keep writing this is good
person Anon
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Across the Ages was so good I was sad when it ended. I'm glad you decided to start this one. Thanks for always being so fast with your updates. I hope it stays that way! Great job as always.
person Anon
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
is toga going to fall for a human too? id like to see him atleast have a tryst with a demoness, and older demoness one that could show him a few things lol Togas awesome