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for Chronicles of the West

by inuyoukai8

person Rawben
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww ryu! baka! lol... great chapter! such cute pairings! and lol! kouga's kid's a dork!!!!!!! ;)
person Anon
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think ryu and silvana could be a good match, although i cant wait for kurama and taisha to get together, so I wonder what this beast will be? hope you update soon, oh and since there are too many anons around I decided to use a name so you would know its me reviewing. Since im your regular anon reviewer lol
-cherrycolachick
person Rawben
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg!! she's gonna get her sight back!! :O and what's she gonna do when she sees toga for the first time?? ...either make out w/ him, or pass out. lol... great chapter! i love the multiple love interests!
person Style
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting.....hope to meet their families in the next few chapters.
person Anon
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i was reading the news today and there was this baby penguin that was stolen from a zoo for what is believed to be a christmas gift and guess what its name was? Toga lol. So toga has the hots for aislin, guess shes a little different from rin then lol. Well I hope you don't get to feeling better, so you can stay in bed all day and write more fanfiction. In fact you should come down with a permanent but non lifethreatening debilitating illness, lol. Just kidding, i hope you get to feeling better:)
person Rawben
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww she's such a nice girl. lol...they have a unique relationship, but hey, who am i to knock friends w/ benefits? ;) great chapter! love the lemon! and i love that toga got to see into her life a bit more!! poor girl!
person Rawben
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
niiice! poor toga! he's trying to stay away for her sake... now he's runnin to Silvana...for some lovin. lol... and what did she find out that she wanted to tell toga??? some secret about aislin? btw: sucks that you're sick... i'm not. ha! ;) get well soon!
person Me
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can hardly stand how cute Toga is....geeze. I wouldn't mind a Toga of my own lol :P
person fushigiyugifan
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo this is a wonderful story. i like it alot. Please update soon I'm curious as to find out exactly what will happen next between aislin and Toga. great job.
^_^
person Rawben
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, yeah, dont question me again woman... or i'll kiss you to death. lol... quite the punishment toga ;) yeah, he thinks he's tough..