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for Chronicles of the West

by inuyoukai8

person Rawben
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol!! it is funny to see shippo like that! lol! and wow! great lemon! :O damn!!
person Rawben
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww! her daddy! too cute! ;) nice chapter! and lol for madu's ...unrequited ...love... if you can call it love ;)
person M&M
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! Please update soon! Cant' wait to see how this story ends.
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so i think i might have figured out part of the riddle, the icemaker holds the key, is that ippiku? So do the ppl turn into trees? Ohhh smut in the next chapter- now you've got me excited lol!!!

oh yeah and i forgot last time
-cherrycolachick
person Rawben
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol! sess and inu takin their women in the gardens?! sess should teach that barrier trick to inu ;)...
great chapter!! love the adventure in the caves!
person Style
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the previous story and this one. Hope the story can be continue in some ways. ie. add some elements from the latest manga..
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good update, can't wait for the rest of the riddle to fall into place, oh and you had a little error where you were talking about ryu and silvana in the cave together you referred to silvana as aislin. Just thought i'd let you know, not auditioning to be a beta or anything lol :) so when are you updating again, Now? now would be a good time lol
person Style
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is creative. So many great ideas in the story.
person Rawben
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*hums indiana jones theme song* yey for the quest! and nice riddle! i can't wait to see everyone's specific talents come through! ...but what's aislin gonna do while they're all gone?? i'd be bored out of my mind... but she has a few friends right?
person Rawben
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow toga. good man! i agree! he shouldn't take her b/c she basically depends solely on him! great chapter! ryu's hilarious!