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niiiiice! but what's in the box???? :O inquiring minds want to know!

Sprite?? lol, you're such a dork :P I love that Toga would "tarnish" her a bit and that Sesshomaru is going to get a little kick to his ego. Very cute chapters indeed.

Yay! Progress at last! Citrusy progress is even better. I actually know a guy who fully admits that he (and all other guys) are dumb when it comes to women; if only there were more! I've been hoping for a Kurama/Taisha pairing, so I was quite excited about that bit. He needs some razzing from Toga and Ryu about women problems. *grin* But really, everyone else has been bitten by the love bug, he needs some lovin, too. (Poor Madu - find someone for him, please?) My only nitpick (I think it's the end of ch 29): Kurama mentions her golden eyes; aren't they green like Ayeka's? I was insanely curious after reading about the 'scent of alchemy' bit, until you sneakily mentioned Satoru, so I'm assuming he and Victor will find themselves together at some point. (I'd almost forgotten about Satoru until I checked the family tree chart that I had to make to keep all these damn characters straight. Which led me to the question: Where the hell is Souta? My notations say he went to the continent with Kurama, too, but we haven't heard anything about him yet, either.) These inus and their pride - they're their own worst enemies. *sigh* But internal conflict is so wonderfully angsty. (And it keeps the story going longer.) I'm sure there's something else I've been wanting to say, but I just can't think of it right now. Though you should be grateful that you don't have to wade through my multi-paragraph reviews. *grins guiltily*

lol! she's gonna make him think they are?? ohh that might be funny... ;) great chapter!! love the citrus!!

lemon and lime=sprite? ummmm okay lol call it whatever you like as long as there is more of it. wow writing even after a root canal your a trooper. lol that would be so great if ayeka did possess beads to subdue sessh lol, now im really dying for you to make it happen :), loved the sweet sappy heart to heart aislin and toga had, "I owe you my life, but my gift to you is my heart" *sighs* how romantic :)

lol!!1!!!! 'i'll just tarnish it a bit'!!! great!! i'm so excited about the next chapter! and lol..sprite? ;) it was kinda funny... ;) haha!

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Sorry about the twenty eight, fifty eight mix up. All I can say is that it was a very long day and I even updated after I got a root canal!

Well, hope they all can find their love. I thought Kurama love Ayeka. If so, end up with her daughter ?? Ask the author ....

Men are such morons. I very much felt the need to restrain myself from rolling my eyes at their words. Toga and Ryu may be sexy badass men, but I see that they are not above such common insensitive male traits. As good as always:)

Hello. I was just surfing and caught your story. BRAVO !!!

What a great reading this is. The Toga/Aislin pairing has shades of the Sess/adult Rin (which I adore).
This is the only fanfic pairing outside of Sess/Rin fics that I actually enjoy as a central theme.


You've got the talent of a superb writer honing and sharpening her skills. Keep it up.
Great content. Great use of vocabulary. Minimalistic but EVERY SINGLE word counts and evokes plentiful of imagery in the minds of the readers.