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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I've ever felt such instant kinship with an OC as I have with these characters. With the first energetic line, I was hooked. I feel like you practically threw me into your story, and I loved every harrowing minute (in the proverbial sense, I certainly don't love senseless slaughter). I'm instantly curious about these new characters, I'm eager to learn how Kuromu is going to meet the Inu-tachi, if that's where this is headed. His pain was palpable, and his brother's murder was terrifying. You've got a great beginning. Please update soon!