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Wow, this is so clever, I never would have excpeted him to become Naraku... great twist. I look forward to reading more of this.

Chanda

LaLaMoon told me to check this story out and I'm glad she did. I SHOULD be working on my own chapter, but I had to find out what was going to happen next in this story. Neat twist giving us a background on Onigumo like that. And you're right, Naraku would SO not want us to know this story EVER. It'd make him very upset. I can't wait to see what you do with it next.

Far Away Eyes

*gasps!* Are you joking?!! I haven't even read all of this yet... still gasping over chapter 2! What do you mean girl? I read your review and blew out that you read my fic and left a review when you did cos I'd just received an email from Lalamoon to check out your story (she know's what an avid Naraku hentai fiend I am me thinks.... god bless her soul ~_^) I mean... wow... this fic is brilliantly written *runs off to read the rest of the story* Am I gonna be an emotional wreck by the end of this story me wonders.... kudo's sweetpea >_> ... <_<.... ~_^

Be right back!

Going good. Keep it up. Alright.

great story

I'm thinking that Naraku's involved here, but how, I don't know. Reveal the secret soon.

That one rises out of the dark and smacks a person in the face. OniGumo where are you now? Good Job.

goodreading.updatesoon.byebye/hello/hello

Dis' is one good fiction-type fic. Update Soonie spoonie. Did ya's plan to have this Kuromu kid character kill Naraku?
Cause if ya's are, that'd be great!

You Tilimiel are a genius. You need to update this very soon. Thanks for writting this.