rate_review Reviews

Actually it wasn't that bad! I think it was quite entertaining!
Well...Some details would make the greatest wonders, but otherwise I think it's nice!

Heh...MELIKE! ^_^

details, longer chapters...that's all you need!
anyway: the story was kind of good. I've seen worse! :)

Hey People the next chapter is up! Hope you like it :D

ok i read it, it looked almost just like Sango's new fic. Even the small almost noextistant rape scene was almost the same. Figures, she reviewed your other post seeing a story just like hers. I'll give you this much yours was a little better but you need to stretch it out and make it alot longer, give more details please. It was too rushed, just go back over the chapter and add more detail and give us some background. OHH and I didn't see a disclaimer, might want to add one.

Okay, I agree with Anon. You need to put a disclaimer. Also, your story needs work. I'd suggest getting a beta to help you.

I Naraku would never RAP my Lady love Sango.... now Kagome is a ass but my dick would rote off if i did her...

Sorry My Chapters Are Soo Short I Only Have a little time on my computer NOT :P lol

Well Excuse me for sucking at writing stories! LLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL