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for The Sun and the Moon

by GrayWolf

person djl
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool beans... good chapter... so when do we actually have the torture scene? Blood and gore, that is what I am about. Anyway please update soon
person GrayWolf
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please review my storie. I've updated alot of chapters. Any suggestions on how to improve? This is my first fanfiction story :(
person fire fly
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Love the tail delio! Update soon!
person Sesshomaru's mate
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooooooo O_O fantastic! heh, keep up the good work!
person Inufangirl007
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thanks for updating! good chapter, i love that u gave inu a deamon marking that looked like a sun! opposite attract! im dieing to read more!
person AmusedWitch
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:shudders: I suppose that its my fault that I continue on to the next chapter, but I was praying that maybe, just maybe it would get better. PLEASE GET A BETA!!
person djl
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
do not leave me hanging like this... I was so ready to read a torture scene... please update soon
person djl
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very touching chapter... I like the stories where Sesshomaru and Inuyasha actually get along
person djl
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so have Inuyasha and Sesshomaru done anything beyond brotherly love already? Or are they just realizing these feelings? Anyway good chappie so far
person djl
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok so they are mates already... anyway good chapter... just fix the speeling errors and a little more detail and the story will be ok... I do not like to criticize other's stories, because I cannot write worth shit so... please update soon. Could you possibly send me the link to your update? That would be cool... Thanx