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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great! so thats how you made sesshomaru loosing his arm! nice. i hope inuyasha's alright.. updates soon!
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry u havnt gotten any reviews, if its any consolation, i liked your story. i hope you update soon.
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg this is the best christmas present i have gotten-looks at her junky pile of presents-havnt they got it through my head i dont want to anything to with anything thats not a sword and aint anime
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool beans... torture scene. Have to love it... I did... anyway cannot wait to see what happens between Sesshomaru and Naraku
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice! I love how you put sesshomaru, gives him a new personality. update soon!
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Swweeet! up dates sooon! i love it! i'm coming back! i love the tortures scenes.. poor inuyasha i hope he and his brother come out alright. very suspencefull!
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude! when is the MPEG coming? but i love your story!
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, Crimson. I think it's improved. But I liked the one before it was torn down origanaly. Believe your back to where you were when you had it up. Now you can create new chapters, instead of rewritting, I know how that goes. Anyways, I'm coming back from Egypt soon so I think I can fly over and drop your thing off.
But anyways better get going, let me know when you have more up alright? Love you much- Anku
But anyways better get going, let me know when you have more up alright? Love you much- Anku
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ummm... Naraku can't hold Inuyasha's heart.
The reason he holds Kagura's is because he created her. He's got Kanna's as well I believe, but none of the people he didn't make.
You are not very much in character with Sesshomaru, which kinda ruins the entire story for me cause he's my fav character. :(
The reason he holds Kagura's is because he created her. He's got Kanna's as well I believe, but none of the people he didn't make.
You are not very much in character with Sesshomaru, which kinda ruins the entire story for me cause he's my fav character. :(
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! i think the title is good the way it is. The reason u'ye not getting that many reviews may be cuz u keep changing it ^__^U ! its a really good story, and i like the way u rewrote it cuz its a lot more intresting, but u keep changing it a lot! just stick to what u have written and keep goiing. =D