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for The Sun and the Moon

by GrayWolf

person djl
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool beans... cannot wait to see what happens next
person cassie-the-duck
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLZ PLZ continue i have to read more! it took you so long to update i was in suspence! you ahve to write more soon.
person silverman
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ouch! (For chapter 4)
person cassie-the-duck
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(chapter 4) write more write more! the beging was a little confusing i almost stoped reading it because i had already read that part but the rest was so good! keep writing!
person Last Hope8569
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
uh, chapter 3 and chapter 4 are the exactly the same... just to let ya know. its getting very good... sex ad bed slave? WHAT!! NO INUYASHA!! Sesshy better hurry up and find him!! grr!! please update soon! rock on!! *thumbs up* :P ;p (chapter 4)
person Last Hope8569
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(chapt 1) aw! sad chapter ending but a cute beginning
person funnygall
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh NO. Hurry Sessy you must save Inuyasha. Please update. I love this fic. (chapt 3)
person Redeyes
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
IT'S TO SUSPENSEFULL!!! UPDATE SOON!!! OMG ITS GREAT!!
person Kurama
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww thats so sad.. i want to cry now, but i love it keep it up!
person djl
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool beans...where did you get the idea for the ring that goes around the penis? Quite interesting! Anyway good chapter...cannot wait to see if Sesshomaru and Inuyasha actually make it home