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wow,what can i say. Naraku just needs to leave the happy couple alone!!! Finally...kagome is out of the way . woot-woot!!Please hurry with another chapter i wanna see what the pups'll be like!!!

OMG! Thisfic is so amazing and I'm only on chapter 2. You rock. Major props to you!

i'm glad to see you have updated. i like this chapter, it was funny and had alot of inu/sessh moments that i felt needed to be there. their father is hilarious and inu's mom is just so sweet. can't wait to read more. :)

Maybe they shouldn't have pups yet. . . it would kinda throw off the whole Naraku part of the story wouldn't it. I like them not having pups but Naraku thinking that Inu and Sessy are having them somehow and then trying to use that to his advantage then the ending of the fic could have them have two pups each. . . Just a wild suggestion. Loves the fic anyways.

this chapter was hot. darn that naraku, i wish sessh left him unconscious or something. oh well i'm glad they finally got a chance to express their feelings for one another if you get my drift. cant wait to read more so update soon and keep the good writing coming.

nice chapter, it was funny though having inu wear the helmet and having stick his head out the car window. i would have luved to seen that. cant wait to read the next chapter and hope there's a lemon? maybe? ok anyway update soon and keep it up. :D

I know it's wrong but every time you'd metion the helmet I'd burst in to laughter.
Ah, anyways, I love this story and can't wait for you to update!
SO DO IT NOW!

you have to finish this story. its getting good and damn that naraku, always screwing with others. i hope they find and kill him soon. and i think its nice how you have them both healing with one another so when the time comes they will understand the other a bit more. can't wait to read more. also i liked the fact you had buyo form a sort of bond with the demons, it was cute. :D

I like the story so far (starting to read chap 9) but in chapter 8 you had the problem of Erectile Dysfunction wrong. It's when the penis doesn't stay hard not the erection won't go down (whoever this happens to really needs to go the hospital. Oh, it's dysfuntionally but that's not the definition of Erectile Dysfunction. I don't know what's that problem called). Thought I should point that out.

Hey lol yah i know i do need to lengthen the chapters i usually write it down on paper and its really long then i say that should be good for a chapter and type it up but i always ends up smaller so i'll try to work on it lol and i try to describe a lot to but i also want to get the actions right so i'll work on and i like your story too its one o f my favourites keep up the good work. i hope you can add more chapters here now instead of fanfiction.net cause i cant review on that site it wont recognize me e-mail so meh. lol. read the next chapter lol its up and runnin. and i hope to update a lot more and make them better.