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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow .... im glad that they are ok .. and now they have to get shot ..hmm will inutaisho get shots to... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it as much as dear brother. can't wait to read more. update soon.
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving your story, but I would love it so much more if you would just put a little extra beta/editing effort into it. For example- Erectile Dysfunction is when you 'can't get it up', Priapism is when you 'can't get it to go down'. And that 'expensive' meal they had which was 200 Yen comes to about $1.70. Ive seen that mistake before with Yen, and its not really hard to fix that in writing, just remember that 1 Yen is about 10 cents US. Keep up your writing, it can only get better.
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man .. poor inu yasha... hmm how many are they haveing ...please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yes another great chapter wit some action though we could have someother type of action that didnt include naraku and his evil ways but wat can you do? i hope the pups are okay and poor inu, i swear at the end of this fic he's going to need to see a psychiatrist. maybe all of them will need to see one. lol ok update soon. :)
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Update soon.
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the boy name Kyo. It's got like a wild and untamed type of kick in it. I cant wait until they are born.
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! how can you leave me hanging like this.. I am dying here with wanting to know what is going to happen... I love this story, you , your writing style... PLEASE add another chapter.
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just one thing: Exclamation points are bad. They are not your friend anywhere outside of dialect unless you want to yell at your readers.
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ that was great i love it ... hmm so how manny will they have .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
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