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for The Sun and the Moon

by GrayWolf

person Anonymous
schedule June 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I do love how the story is progressing but I had to write this review as its bugging the heck out of me. The memory Inuyasha had of how he got lost is vastly different from how he went missing at the end of the first chapter. Was this intentional or a mix up?
person Lara_Kal-El
schedule July 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ok with your tution stuff just do what everyone else does and fill out your FAFSA and go with student loans as for the story EVILLLLL YOU HAD TO STOP IT ON A CLIFFY how are you, this was awesome
schedule May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please hurry and update great story
person dela1
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
really great story I hope you update it soon
person MibuWolf
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, hey. You're pretty famous in the undeground fanfiction world. I've been to your website more than once... at least I think it was yours, who knows? You are an amazing author. I hope you grace us with your presence more often. Kudos on the story, btw. Great read
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story so far!! Just the right amount of comedy and terror!
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Delicious! I'm hooked. Damn that naraku and his incubus ways! Great job. More please ^_^
person nchsmi
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story it's smart, funny and very dramatic, with a slice of yoai-hentai for flavor! Truly the right ingredents for a perfect drama/romance/action/adventure! Can't wait for the next chapter!~ B reading U!
person Earendel
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think I've read this before, not bad.
person Dragon7
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.