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for Fading Away

by Lovergal

person LadyOfTheLake
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um...that was REALLY good and well written. You captured Sesshoumaru's emotions perfectly and stuck with the reality of things, which is always a grim reality. I must aplaud you on this because, frankly, I had a few tears rolling and was feeling rather depressed by the time I got done reading. I loved it when you wrote that he was as helpless to change the flow of time as any mortal...exactly something I think he would've realized later in his life. Please don't stop writing stories, there are so few authors out there as good as you...good work!
person LadyOTheLake
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And just so you know...I only review stories I like and those are always the best stories out there!(which are few and far between)
person oxcab
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was the coolest fic i ever read^_^ i can see that happing to sessy
person Jane Angel
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it very much so. But i felt bad for fluffy, poor thing, he wanted his Rin...sure this girl is like his Rin..just...it's not all the same..poor guy
person Wow123
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow....this was really good. Sesshomaru regretting ever making Rin his's. It was a very original idea....I never read a story when Rin was the reincartion (sp?) More please....you should turn this into a longer story....I would like to see how they relationship would develop.
person sphinx
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
is this a one shot? do update soon if its nt
person Lill
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM


Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
person animegirl007
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really good.....I liked it ....keep up the good work.