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for Hell in Your Eyes

by faerygirl44

person anna
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love the way you kept hiei true to chacter.. pleaz write a second part
person saiyajin princess
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woah!!! i hope that there will be an update to this one... out of crossovers of yyh/inu i like hiei/kagome pairings for some unknown reason... please update soon.. ^_^
person Sapphire
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, is this a One-shot? Well, anyways, it's good, make more stories or chapters containing Hiei/Kagome lemons ... PLZ?!?!?!
person JBella
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job! Especially the ending. No immediate happily-ever-after, but Kagome seemed to understand his need for space, and Hiei acknowledged that his feelings weren't going to go away. I could definitely see this turning into a full-length fic, if you decide to go that way...
person Kage Otome (NSI)
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful One-shot! Loved it!
person kougalover123
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was good i loved it keep up the good work.