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for Silent Regrets

by ryukotsusei

person swasdiva
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just. Wow.

It's not often I find stories so rich in imagery but so fragile in emotional scope. Each scene reminded me of dusk, that time of day that's both beautiful and lonely. I could see the dark shades of the shrine grounds sparkling as surely as I could feel the tender pang of Kagome's grief, Kuwabara's helplessness, and Hiei's budding sympathy (not that he'd ever admit to such). My heart swelled with the simple weight of your words, and yeppers, I couldn't help but cry. Reading this chapter felt like listening to music; it was deep, impressionable, instant and touching. I can't wait to read more of this. I'll be honest, I'm not normally a fan of this pairing, but the way you've handled it thus far has me spellbound. Amazing work. Please continue!
person Sayuri-chan
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squeeeee!! What a great first chapter! I know that Kagome is the type to hold all of her feelings inside, and it would take someone who knew the feeling of hiding their inner feeling inside as well to understand her, and maybe help her cope in some way. Enter, HIEI! ^_^ Update soon, this is another great starter.
person Language Partner
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE you!!! Once again you have created a Masterful story. I look forward to future chapters. and I love the dark stuff so keep it coming.
person kougalover123
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great Hiei and Kagome interaction. I want more please update again soon.
person Vivian
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome work my queen, glad to see you working on something else. Bring on the angst and pain I say. *hands you Aoshi cookies* Update soon
person sendosha
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ouch, I have always liked Sota. How is it, that Inuyasha didn´t stay with her. Any fool should have known that she would need a friend in this hard times. It´s nice of Hiei to be there.