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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow you need to do a continuation... I liked the whole Paparazzi idea, and she still has those pics. Just some suggestions (hint, hint.)
Enjoyed the story immensely even if it was two strangers going at it in a store. Very invigorating.
Well I do hope you continue.
Chanda
Enjoyed the story immensely even if it was two strangers going at it in a store. Very invigorating.
Well I do hope you continue.
Chanda
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is an AWSOME fic!! I love it
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was definetly an original one :) Well done! You may want to go over it once more, there were a few gramatical errors, and her wehre it should be a him and the like. Other then that, nice job, me likey.