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by LianalMoon

person I_Naraku
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Will I Naraku in some way like your story..So what will Lady Sango do now that she has a need to be with Sesshomaru??? and will Sesshomaru kill Mariku and what of Inuyasha he should smalle his brother on her.....
person swissnights
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok what is this WE stofe about??? update soon We have to know what happens next to Sango and Seeshomaru
person Chigirl
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Please continue!!!
person Anon
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far, don't get me wrong, but don't you think it's a bit weird that they went from fighting to fucking in a matter of seconds and Sango just went along with it with no thought of her fiancee`? Gotta love a good lemon, but it just kind of confused me.
person Kill Bill
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this, you made Sesshomaru sound perfect like he is in the show.
He has this clamness about him, but he can act saintic sometimes. Please
continue this story with fast pace chapter updates, much appreciated!
person swissnights
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
now that was good i hope you can update soon like in two days???????
tell me was Sango marred to Maroku before she became Sesshomaru mate????
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh goody goody! Another Sango/Sessy-my-fluffy-bishie story! Good start so far sweetpea... hope to see some more soon.
person Missy
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice start.Update soon.
person swissnights
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it update today if you can or tomorrow please
person Shooky
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this has unbelievable potential, if you put a little more detail in the actions of the characters and their feeling I believe this could turn out very well