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Please update soon...You have a very compelling writing style and imagination

WOW!! that was a great start!! And the strength Kagome shows in protecting her child!! WOW!! I am Awestruck by this!! I was wondering why Kagome insisted on marrying "him" (.. spits, hisses, snarls ) And Houjou.. snickers... FINALLY gets a clue only after Kagome is pregnant that she never wanted him in that way.. Can one say dense? Yep. I am really enjoy this story.. So little Taro is about 4 years and few months old, right? I have questions : about if Taro has doggie ears.. How is it that no one can see them? Are they too small or like real puppy ears floppy to be seen? Was it a home birth? How did doctors react? Does Taro have Silver hair or Black hair or a mixture of both? I wonder will you be going into more detail as to why Kagome left? Was it that Kikyou showed up and was staying near by? Was it her fear that the well would seal up? Questions, I shrug my shoulders, that probably get answered later on... But doesn't hurt to whimper for a hint.. giggles!!! I like the way you are taking this story... It is a definite change from the usual. WOW again!!!!!!!!! YOU rock on!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next update!!!

Wow great first chapter so sad... Please update soon.