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Please update as soon as you can. This story is wonderful. I knew Kikyo was up to no good. I can't wait to see what happens next.

I STILL LOVE IT! and cannot WAIT until you update it again!

congrats on baby! is it a boy or girl?

Oh my god, oh my god! Your wstory is sooo fantastic!!! Kagome's son returning the life to Kikyou... that's... won't InuYasha be tempted? Wouldn't Kikyou try to steel him back? You have to update soon!

There is only one little thing and it's about Kagome. I think she is stronger exspeially imotionaly. And she haven't used her powers at all. Are they lost or does she still have them?

Anyways, update soon, please!

I'm liking what you've written so far. I like the way you've had both Inuyasha and Kagome come back together, yet still hold some of the old insecurities of the past. It has been five years without the other, and for them to suddenly profess complete and utter trust without harboring old habits and insecurities, it just would have come off as out of character. The fact that Kikyo still can drive a slight wedge between them, even if Inuyasha is committed, shows how well you portray Kagome. I would think that, even with a child and having Inuyasha take her as his mate, she would still feel somewhat threatened by her mate's past love. I found the abusive husband to be just as digusting as possible. I know some people might say Kagome wouldn't marry him, and in most instances, she wouldn't. You have provided us with a believeable reason. Kagome felt that she could not live at the shrine if her grandfather felt anger towards her and her son, so when a man showed up and was willing to be a father and husband, she took it. She also wanted that father figure for her son, showing how she places her son's needs before her own. The way you portrayed her standing up to him was brilliant. Even though she had realized her mistake and felt shame, she still had some of that strength that she shows all the time. She stood up to him for her son's sake, something that a strong Kagome would do. I love how you've also made InuTaro's character. He's very unique in the fact that he is the Jewel. It's interesting to see how you also took Sesshomaru's logic for hating his brother away. He believed that his father had cheated on his mother, albeit if she were dead at the time, with Inuyasha's mother. To discover that they were in fact, the same, just different incarnations of the same person, that had to be severely disarming. I found that to be unique. Also, how you gave his arm back to him. Most have Kagome or someone who KNOWS Sesshomaru well do this. To have InuTaro do this shows that in the future Sesshomaru might have to rethink several things, including his views of and his relationship with his brother. I will be interested to see how you handle this now alive Kikyo and just what mischief she will cause. The fact that she's actually ALIVE and not dead will certainly change a few things. I do hope, however, that what ever shit she tries to stir up will only make Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship stronger. She should thank both of them for being mates, after all, because if they hadn't, she wouldn't have this second(or is it third. . .or how ever many times she's had her "life" saved) chance at life. Anyways, I'm looking forward to reading the next installment! I hope I haven't babbled on too long!

umm... MORE this is one of my favorite stories...
OOC or not... I LOVE IT

Yeah, you updated... oh my I see what you mean about the plot thickens... Until next time,
Chanda

This was such a cute chapter. I really liked it.

ABSOULUTLY LOVES IT!! write more wench

AWWWE I just adore this story... it is so different from what i have read in the fan fiction string of inuyasha stories before and i truly enjoyed this. I like how OOC Inuyasha gets but then that there are streaks of the INU we all know and love.... this is wonderful...

i hope you are still updating....

i really liked this chapter. not too much happened, and don't take that the worng way. basically, it was a typical family day. and i think it was necessary to the story.

i enjoyed when taro helped the little girl, and the talk that kag and inu had.

for not being beta'ed it didn't hae too many mistakes, a few here or there, but nothing major.

another good chapter, and i can't wait for the next!