rate_review Reviews

I still love it. he showed kouga.

i really hope he did hear them.

I love this story to no end. I noticed a few misspellings, but i'm just in one of those moods right now.

I think there were only really two of them... maybe i misread but at one point you were talking about him building a house to live in with HER ... for somereason i got the impression you meant reminder not reminded...

and then at the end when she says "me to" it should be too.

still I LOVE this story and get hella excited everytime i see it in the updated parts.

Arigatou.

wow that story is sad and I love it please update soon oh please wow like I can't believe you wrote something like this it is totally awesome Like wow please continue pretty please with a cherry on top or is it sugar w/e lol the point is UPDATE SOOOOOOOON!

Very good story. Engrossing. Please continue!

ughn. i still love this story.

update soon!

pleases up date i want to know what happen's

you have no idea how much you pissed me off by not adding more!! lol

I do that to my readers too

congrats on your new boy!
life always takes front seat to silly hobbies.

sadly sometimes.. but i hope you are doing well

nice cliffy.

Continue please. I love this story. Please, please continue quickly. Good job!

Again, I must say that I am fully enjoying this story as well as the others you have written, you create that state of ambiance that draws the reader back and I fully apreciate this.
The characters are a tad OOC but It is wonderfully pulled off, I hope that you will continue this as soon as you are able!!!

You and doggieearlover as well as like two others are like my favorite writers on this site... thank you for uplifting my spirit in the fan fiction writer... there are some that just don't get it.

FINISH SOOOOON lmao

I'm enthralled!

Heathe.

Poor Inuyasha. He has never taken his mortal night all that well. It's a good thing he made it up to Taro, though. The poor kid probably remembered a little bit from that other guy, the mean one, for just a little bit. At least he knew he shouldn't have been so mean in the end. And going fishing with his papa probably helped! Wow. They actually CLEANED them without being told they had to do it? That's amazing. Kikyo has now entered the realm of super creepy. Regardless of the latest manga arcs, you've given us the Kikyo we used to see buzzing around in the past, shortly after her ressurection. The one who actually tried to kill Kagome, the one who was vindictive. BEFORE Kagome had ever saved her. And on top of it, you've gone and made her a dark miko to boot. She's also actually alive, which adds a flavor to what she's doing. I just have to wonder. Has Kikyo EVER heard of gratitude? For Christ's sake, it was Kagome and Inuyasha's SON who gave her actual life back. What is the matter with her? Sure, she can't have Inuyasha, but move on already. I wonder how she'll be able to hide from Kaede the fact that she has become a dark miko. I can't imagine she'd leave the village and go off. She likes the close proxmity between the village and Inuyasha and Kagome's home. It would seem she's also some how managed to penetrate the seals that Kagome placed on the home to make her feel dirty, or was that because Kikyo still possesses a portion of her soul and Kagome could feel it become tainted? It makes me wonder if Kikyo did that to Kagome, or if it's just a side effect of her going dark. The seals themselves, poor Inuyasha and Kagome had to be freaked out when their son came in and demanded they be put up, not to mention the way he sliced his palm open to help. I wonder if Kikyo will ever realize that Kagome is actually powerful, and that if she should go after Taro that she will not only face another miko, but a mother's wrath. I can't wait to see what you have happen next. This chapter was well done. You gave us Kikyo's transformation while leaving us hanging enough to wait eagerly for the next chapter. I hope she doesn't hurt Taro! And good luck with the baby! We'll be patient about the next chapter...a little.