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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good... Kagome's blind, though. And the grammar errors annoy me alittle, so if you have time to fix those please do. Despite this I really like this story, so update soon!
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well very intresting and now he finds kikio
o boy this is gonna b good
anyway plz update soon
o boy this is gonna b good
anyway plz update soon
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i look forward to more chapters so dont give up, keep up the good work and update again soon.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
god that was a good chapter >.<
and its funny as hell that his name means that >.<
anywho update soon ill be watching ^_^
BK
and its funny as hell that his name means that >.<
anywho update soon ill be watching ^_^
BK
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying your story. I think you villain is pretty interesting though, if one is only concerned with Kagome and Sango, not that hard to thwart. Iknow, I know, they will save everyone.
However, the spelling needs some work. Some of the typos are unintentionally hilarious like Inuyasha and Kouga "lounging" at each other. I've never uploaded to AFF but I understand it sometimes mangles pieces. Perhaps that is part of the problem.
However, the spelling needs some work. Some of the typos are unintentionally hilarious like Inuyasha and Kouga "lounging" at each other. I've never uploaded to AFF but I understand it sometimes mangles pieces. Perhaps that is part of the problem.
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omfg please update soon this story is bad fuckin ass ^_^ and yeah lol ill be watching so update soon
BK
BK
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That beginning was weird.But when i was done i got it what it meant. I guess that 'demon' is the one after Kagome right? haha...im so smart.lol. Well Please update a.s.a.p.
Thanks. . .
~Dream Girl
Thanks. . .
~Dream Girl
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that definetly took an unsupecting twist a lust demon on the prowl... and handsome... Like it keep the chaps coming.
Chanda
Chanda
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story just got interesting :D