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for Good-Bye

by Xakana

person bd84
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy... omg! dayum girl! it IS more merciful when you just kill them all!
person swasdiva
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And...I'm a blubbering mess of tears. Holy Hell, that's what that was. Literally, considering isn't that what the name 'Naraku' translates to? Hell? Sadly, this story is close to life, not in a personal sense, but in the sense that not everything has a happy ending. Sometimes tragedies are so encompassing that so joy can be readily found. I could definitely see this being continued, if, per se, you were a fan of SxK pairings and them working throught the pain together, but that would almost be a sell-out, wouldn't it? The point of this piece is the pain, and let me tell you, it was heartbreakingly effective. Great work.