AFF Fiction Portal
person Anonymous
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. This is the first time i have ever cried at reading a gangic, and i dont even like this pairing. A great story though!
person Anonymous
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
also, the last two lines were amazing!
person ItachixSakura4ever
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was good and all, but why did you rate it "M"? It should be rated "T" at most. Anyway, nice job.
person moonflower
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it but it was so SAd (tears in eyes wipes away)
sesshomaru can't be slaid by a lowly demon oh well at least there together
person Soma
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Short but very touching. *sniffles*
person PrinceVegeta's Gurl
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww that was so cute, you almost made me cry poor Rin and Sesshomaru -_-
person EverRin
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(ish crying) THAT WAS SAD!!!!!!!!!!!! Waaaaaaah!!!!!!!!!!
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww.

tastefully done, not too sappy, just how i would picture sess and rin.
person Devon M
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty hot.