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Oh man, #54 & 55 ...it's been a while since I've enjoyed a chapter where you were
sympathising[?] with the lead character...and chanting ''Kill the Bitch!!! Just kill
her!!! Then bring her back with Tenseiga.''

But, when Sesshomaru started thinking of the best way to maim Kagome, that was TOO
funny! :-]

Now, what I don't get is between the 2 mates, I'm surprised it's Inuyasha who doesn't
understand how his mate thinks, you'd THINK he would have it figured out DESPITE his
insecurities of being a hanyou mated to a full demon. You'd think the human side of
him would be intuitive.

Will he express himself anytime soon?

pls pls pls do update soon!! i'm dying from the cliffie.
and i do so hope u intend to finish this story, its really good: sensible grammar, accurate spelling, reasonable characters, logical plotlines, interesting twists .. the list is endless, in short this story has me hooked. keep 'em coming!!

i read this fic about a year ago and I've just reread it and I was so pleased to find some updates. I still looove it as much as I did the first time. the tension and the viewpoints all add interesting twists to the whole thing. I love how well set out everything is, and how everything is done quite slowly. I really hope Sesshomaru realises he needs to appease Inuyasha's human feelings as well. He's just not thinking with his heart!

Hope you update sooon!

I normally try not to do this, but...

UPDATE PLEASE

It's been soooo long since the last (awesome) one. There are still people eagerly checking this story every day, I assure you...

This is SOOOOO good !! I LOVE it!! But there is one thin g I must say and that is...PLEASE give Sesshoumaru his arm back!!! I've been picturing him with it all along but still it would make it so much better to see him get it back. He's just not as impressive without it. I must say. I love him but just can't picture him lacking an arm with out cringing. So itf you could posssibly find some way to let himn retrieve his or grow one back via magic or his own powers etc that would be so much better. Oh and one more thing...I think what you are going for with the witches name is Tsubaki ( the tsu makes a sound like zoo with a the z having a sound a cross between the z and t) It's just that I have never seen anything japanese spelt like that XD. I could be wrong and sorry if I am but I think this is what your aiming for. Anyways hope to hear more from you soon (can't be soon enough as far as I'm concerned *wink*) and congrats on the baby and the move.

I love this story and I've noticed it's been a long time since you last updated. I hope everything is well with you. I'm so curious over how Sesshomaru will react to seeing Inuyasha's human form.
Please update soon!

i <3 this story! please (if possible) update soon, i'm like hooked on it!!

It took me much longer then it normally does to read something, but you'll be glad to know that since I started reading this story, that I just haven't been able to stop. I can't wait to see where this goes next, and I'm going to do my best to not be impatient at the entire updating thing. Not everyone has the huge amounts of time at their disposal like I do. Which is a lie, I just don't do what I'm supposed to do and do something else.

Anyways, yes, I adore this story in all its perfection and I can't wait to see what happens next! You'll be happy to know that I think you're doing a marvelous job of keeping everyone in character for the situations that they're in; and that's what makes a good author and a good fanfiction.

There's my urge to smack Fluffy over the head for all his stupidity, and yell at him that he should be more affectionate instead of so cold; but that's nothing out of the ordinary. I still want to throttle Kagome, and her reactions just make it even more so. As... disturbing as the thought is to us modern peoples, we have to remember that this is a different time, with different customs. While I've never heard nor read of such unions between immediate siblings, it doesn't disgust me. I think that love is love, no matter where it comes from; and you should do you best to be happy no matter what dish life doles at you.

Hm, I wonder if this is the longest review you've ever gotten? Oh well, it doesn't really matter; I'm long winded and have a tendency to leave these rambling reviews that may not completely pertain to the story itself. I'll stop that train of thought there and just focus on the story.

Like I said, beautifully well-written and thought out. You're excellent at pacing, and showing various sides to different scenarios before seamlessly moving on is breath-taking; I really enjoy this. As well, you're plot is incredibly subtle and the way you drop hints while making it seem like you're not is really great. It's a well-written and masterfully written piece, one of the view that I'll give that honor to.

Of course, you have the honor of being the second incest story I've ever read, as well as the second mpreg. This is good, the fact that you've captured my attention with something like that; I'm normally horribly against it and will refused to read it. The fact that you've made me love this story and adore makes me incredibly happy; to me, it's about whether or not there's a suitable explanation to WHY the man can get pregnant, and you've supplied me with that reasoning. And you did it in a flawless and incredibly plausible way for the universe; excellent going there too!

Let's see... ah yes, I shall await updates, at which point I'm sure that my review won't be nearly as long as this one. But don't be surprised if you hear more from me; I'll have to go back and discuss all of my favorite parts as well. I just can't remember them all!

So, best of luck and hope to be reading more soon. Oh yes, and congratulations.

Viridian Kat.

Amazing fic! It's absolutely brilliant in every way. I'm seriously looking forward to the next chapter. However, I will wait patiently on the basis that anyone with a small child, let alone 2, barely has time to sleep let alone write.
Thanks for posting and then not abandoning the fantastic fic!
(from) Ronnie. :)

this is a great story ! i love your sessinu ! thank you !