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Great chapter. Though I think Inuyasha should give Sesshomaru a hard time!

Why did you stop?

I was so into it that I didn't realize I was at the end of the chapter. It was getting good. Waiting for the next chapter. I should be picking up my own fic again, but I can't find a away to continue with it. But you have me until I can make a decision.

Whose fangs are they?

Well how many people do we have in the clearing with fangs at the moment?

Inuyasha.

Sesshomaru.

Unless Inuyasha can bite the back of his own neck... or any part of his neck for that matter...

Or maybe you have someone else involved in this? Kouga or someone else like that?

Of course, if someone else dared to mark Inuyasha with Sesshomaru right there (though why Bokusenou didn't notice them is beyond me) after he had been looking for him for so long... well, I imagine a bunch of little bloody specs on the ground is about all that will be left of the intruder.

Hm.

Well I guess I'll just have to wait and see what you have planned.

BTW, the above review was from me, I forgot to type in my name. ^_^

Let's see...how many reasons do I have to explain just how awesome this fic is?
1. You write Inu-chan and Sesshy well. I mean, really well. Inuyasha's not weepy or self-pitying, and Sesshomaru isn't suddenly turning into an emotional ball of sap the second he starts to find Inuyasha remotely attractive.
2. You aren't rushing the fic at all, which is a feat in itself because I haven't seen many Inu/Sess fics, or Inu/anybody for that matter, that doesn't jump right into the mating and just gives some lameass excuse for the mpreg along the way. Which brings me to my next point:
3. Valid explanation for the mpreg. Sure, most are valid, but so far yours is one of the few I've seen that logically makes sense, and that earns mucho points in the awesomeness factor as far as I'm concerned.
4. The rabbits. I love the raw rabbits cravings. Call me a freak, but I think it's hilarious that of all things you'd pick raw rabbits for that kinda thing.
5. You update often, and although I know that's not the most important thing in judging a fic, it still is a plus. That, and you manage to do so without taking away from the quality of the fic, which isn't something everyone can do.
So..5. More than enough, I think, considering they are very important. Actually, I probably thought of more, but forgot along the way. ^^""
Anywho, thankyou so much for sharing this awesome fic, and keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next chap, but don't you rush! *wags finger*
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:P How are you always able to update when I need desperately something good to read? Lol. Anyhow, great schapter of great fic. Sess seems a bit ooc, but in a good way. I'm happy for him that his problems are going to solve themselves litle by litle. :D And that hole inu's conversation with bokusenou.. that was pure lol. I almost waked up the hole house, because I laughed so hard.. 'shouln't be reading funny things in the middle of the night. :P But please update soon! And know that your fic is one of the best. :P

o.O....Cool.
I just finished reading 13 a couple hours ago...and then you update with 14.
Scary. But I really like this fic. It's almost weird how quickly it's moving....^___^ Gotta love it.
Thanks again!

Ok, i've always hated Kagome for what she does when she gets upset..Selfish bitch that she is..Why can't he take off that DAMN neckless...??
In every story, that bitch has to be mean and everything and Inu has too listen to her..sooo annoying...

Will you do anything about it???

good story but a bit slow where the plot is concerned...

Damn I love this fic. I'm having so much fun with it. I love that Sess is so docile right now with Inu. I just can't wait to see what happens next. I'm hoping that the fangs are Sess's. Who's else could they be. I hope Sess is going to tell Inu that he's wrong by thinking that he's worthless. Oh so much goodness in this story. Keep these great chapters coming, please. ^_^

ahhh update soon i'm addicted to ur tory!!