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Aaah, just read chapter thirteen and, Inuyasha's body is changing in order to accomodate the ability to carry children, but he's not pregnant. Okay. I think I get it. So, anyhey. Sorry for jumping into conclusions hehe. ^^ Okay, onto the next chapter.

I love this story. It's really good, it's really well-writen. I will comment on one thing, the lemon(I realize it's your first one) is really extremely short. But then again it a dream and all. Just commenting. Anyway, I can't wait for an update.

Truly a wonderful story. I cain't wiat till your next update.

Okay, I'm almost crying now. Poor Inuyasha, his demon side fighting with the human side in order to transform. It's probably too late to find a female inu and most likely is not in your plot. Plot bunnies...Ah! I'll give this one to Inuyasha for dinner! LOL Great chapter. Oh, I wonder if Kaede could help. Probably not since it's never happened before. Oh well. I'm glad that we got to see into Sesshoumaru's mind. Ooooooh, maybe Inu could stay full demon most of the time once he transforms, without the mindlessness of course. I'm sure that you hate me by now. It's just that I get excited when there are endless possibilities. I hate it when I know what is in store. I could think of more outcomes, but I've done enough damage. You are doing a great job. I look forward to the next chappie.

Snowfall

Oh, what's wrong with Inuyasha?! Oh, I truely hope you will not leave it at this for too long! I cannot wait for the next chapter! Please update soon! PLEASE! TToTT poor inuyasha. what's with the bunny's though? is it because bunnies are thought to be the symbol of fertility in Folk Lore?

Well I would like to say that I have been truly enjoying your story. I appreciate the fact that for one, your story is well thought out. I also am so very happy that you have not made Inuyasha a bumbling idiot. I’m not sure if this has something to do with sub vs dub for the anime, but really, the number of people that make him into a total idiot is ridiculous. Plus I commend your writing of the scene in which Sesshoumaru rationalizes getting drunk. I couldn’t help but chuckle over the matter. At any rate, I’ve only managed to read the first 6 chapters, so I still have a ways to go. Yet I wanted to mention something about the end of chapter six, with the fight scene. My assumption is that Sesshoumaru is one armed? So how is it that he managed to strike Inuyasha with his claws, if he is still holding on to tokijin? Just something I noticed from the scene.

Really great!

^_^^_^ - (I Love Twins!)

Hooray! You updated! And I really liked how Sesshomaru's battling it out with his youki! LOL! It's so fucking hilarious! I especially love this paragraph:

Remembering what his brother had said about the stomach aches and rabbits, he decided to go catch one now before waking Inuyasha, telling himself that he was only doing it so that they could get moving faster. The desire to assist his intended mate in any way possible while he was in a weakened state had nothing to do with it.

BWUAHA!! GREAT job! You've GOT to update!


-DM

Excellent excellent excellent.
I've enjoyed every chapter, and thank you for updating so often! You're spoiling us!

I'm not. :P I really love the way you are writing this, and everytime I see a new update, it brightens my day. :D And I actually like your idea of making Inuyasha skitsofrenic.. :P (if you do write it that way.. in finnish it's skitsofreenikko..) I have read many fics that make Sess a bit lunatic/crazy/mad but making Inu yasha lunatic.... hm.. That's new. :P And a good Idea. Geep going!