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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Things are certainly heating up for Sesshoumaru! It looks like Inuyasha will be giving him an earful and I think the seer Sturaki will get her digs in too. Every nasty thing Sesshoumaru has done and said to Inuyasha is going to come back on his head. I feel a bit sorry for Sesshoumaru - he is in such deep denial. He needs to let his inner demon loose per Sturaki ('...be open...') and listen up to it. He is such a control freak! LOL
The story is moving along quite nicely I think. It's a good thing that the rest of Inuyasha's 'pack' is out of the picture for a while. The brothers need some time to together. Take care!
The story is moving along quite nicely I think. It's a good thing that the rest of Inuyasha's 'pack' is out of the picture for a while. The brothers need some time to together. Take care!
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 25:
Good job keeping Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru in character. Sesshuomaru
being concerned for Inuyasha's emotional well-being was a nice touch.
And Inuyasha being so dejected was really sad. His feminine hormones
must be really starting to take effect. What could be worse than being
rejected by his mate? A horrible thought. Mmm, given his condition,
he probably shouldn't stray too far from Sesshoumaru. The change
may not be complete and there may be strong demons out there
drawn to mate him. I can see that you had problems, as you said.
There seemed to be less then usual action in this chapter. I think that
perhaps Sesshoumaru should have more stress put on him by being
forced to protect Inuyasha from some danger. Maybe that would be
a good direction to go?
Snowfall
Good job keeping Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru in character. Sesshuomaru
being concerned for Inuyasha's emotional well-being was a nice touch.
And Inuyasha being so dejected was really sad. His feminine hormones
must be really starting to take effect. What could be worse than being
rejected by his mate? A horrible thought. Mmm, given his condition,
he probably shouldn't stray too far from Sesshoumaru. The change
may not be complete and there may be strong demons out there
drawn to mate him. I can see that you had problems, as you said.
There seemed to be less then usual action in this chapter. I think that
perhaps Sesshoumaru should have more stress put on him by being
forced to protect Inuyasha from some danger. Maybe that would be
a good direction to go?
Snowfall
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad we're off shippo's pov. I think that Sessy's being quite civil, perhaps Inuyasha shouldn't bait the tiger.
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very good! Hope you keep it up, I really want to know what's going to happen next.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was so cutie! I think Sesshoumaru is in way denial! He needs to get over the fact that Inuyasha is his mate and just do the dirty deed!
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol. That's all I need to say. This was perfeckt. I'm waiting for more to come soon. :P
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
u have got to update soon i love all the chacterization. keep up the good work. :D
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really cool!
I can't believe how quickly and regularly you update, as well as keep the story and plot so good AND keep the characters in character.
You're really good!
I can't believe how quickly and regularly you update, as well as keep the story and plot so good AND keep the characters in character.
You're really good!
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was funny. *big smile* It made me laugh. But now, I want to read more. Hope to it, author. Guess, I should get to work on a piece of my own. HEHEHE. Hmmm. You going to add a lemon scene soon or not? Just curious.