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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The guys are taking their act on the road –a Feudal, youki kind of Crosby and Hope show! Lots of misunderstanding from both sides (they don’t know how to communicate with each other and can’t seem to do it with without resorting to violence or taunting). Thanks for the front row seat! Nice job of showing what each of them are thinking about the same subject– they are both at total odds with each other.
I don’t think either of them are out of character too much; after all, they are both suffering from a bad case of raging youki hormones and are not able to think very clearly. Anything could happen. What would happen if Inuyasha decided to use the same ‘Inuyouki Psychology 101’ methods on his brother as Sesshoumaru did to get him to talk? Sesshoumaru could really find himself not behaving as a ‘Lord’ should.
Would you consider listing the translations for Sturaki and Kurasko (and any other characters that we get to meet) when you are finished? Just for the fun of it I tried to track down Sturaki and wound up in some totally unexpected places! It doesn’t seem to be Japanese. Quit a few websites pointed me towards biblical references and from what I could figure out, it has something to do with the ability to conceive. And then there was one site that brought up the word ‘stork’ (the symbol for baby delivery jumped to mind!) as a derivative. I’m not having any luck with Kurasko at all. Looking forward to your next chapter!
I don’t think either of them are out of character too much; after all, they are both suffering from a bad case of raging youki hormones and are not able to think very clearly. Anything could happen. What would happen if Inuyasha decided to use the same ‘Inuyouki Psychology 101’ methods on his brother as Sesshoumaru did to get him to talk? Sesshoumaru could really find himself not behaving as a ‘Lord’ should.
Would you consider listing the translations for Sturaki and Kurasko (and any other characters that we get to meet) when you are finished? Just for the fun of it I tried to track down Sturaki and wound up in some totally unexpected places! It doesn’t seem to be Japanese. Quit a few websites pointed me towards biblical references and from what I could figure out, it has something to do with the ability to conceive. And then there was one site that brought up the word ‘stork’ (the symbol for baby delivery jumped to mind!) as a derivative. I’m not having any luck with Kurasko at all. Looking forward to your next chapter!
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, i just love this story. it must really suck, having Naraku to deal with then having this new invader. man, they sure do have their hands full. Can't wait for the next chapter! Will wait paciently as your loyal fan!
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
u have such a great written style update soon!
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!
I turn my back for five seconds, and WHAM! You give us two updates!
And what very good updates they are! -- This is really starting to get interesting! Are you actually gonna make it Mpreg, or are you gonna cut off and have that in a sequel or something?
I turn my back for five seconds, and WHAM! You give us two updates!
And what very good updates they are! -- This is really starting to get interesting! Are you actually gonna make it Mpreg, or are you gonna cut off and have that in a sequel or something?
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw. *blushes* Anytime you need a little help, I'm here. Yup, and that's the kind of protection I was talking about. Now, Sesshoumaru really needs to know what the hell is going on with him. He doesn't seem to be any closer to reconciling with his youkai. The king of denial. Yup. It's going to take a hell of a lot more to get it through his thick skull that there is no justifiable reason to reject Inuyasha as his mate. Hihi. It would be funny if they were swarmed with demons wanting to mate them both. LOL Sorry, bunny trail that. Um...meds making me loopy. I really believe that Inuyasha needs to be seriously threatened and injured in order for Sesshoumaru's youkai to finally take over and say 'Enough of this shit!' LOL Well, great chapter and I anxiously await the next.
Snowfall
Snowfall
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww poor dejected feeling inuyasha :( even though inside sesshoumaru is starting to care, he still won't show it and inuyasha is suffering for it... and now kuraski shows up and sess is ignoring him *sniffles* damn, the change to inuyasha is really draining, ne? rest up inuyasha!! i hope sesshy starts to come around and gets it through his head what inuyasha needs from him.. maybe once they get to sturaki? hmm.. i guess i'll just hafta wait and see ^__^
~ lg
~ lg
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hooray! Another fantastic update! This was one of my favorite lines: “Yo, moron, use your nose or, hell, use your eyes even. I’m not a girl!” I really think the pause between "or, hell, use your eyes even!" is hilarious! Great job! Update soon!
-DM
-DM
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! sess does strike me as possesive sometimes. Poor inu, if his life wasn't stressful enough. Sess needs to admit his feelings. i can't wait to read more! PLEASE update soon!!!
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwww, i wanted to read some more. you were
just getting to the good stuff. but then you threw
water over me. i was ready to see a knock down
drag out fight between sesshomaru and the
interloper. oh well, guess i'll have to wait until
the next chapter.
just getting to the good stuff. but then you threw
water over me. i was ready to see a knock down
drag out fight between sesshomaru and the
interloper. oh well, guess i'll have to wait until
the next chapter.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! i love sess pov's! great chapter! i like it when sess is trying to figth his youki, it makes him realize that he really does care about inu! please update soon!