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for The Prophecy

by mshutts

person acr
schedule May 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Inuyasha is finally giving Sesshomaru some serious trouble.
person ichie-chan(too lazy to sign in)
schedule May 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, i don't think that i have reviewed before, but i have been reading this story for a while and i can't get enough of it! i love what you do with the characters and how they are still in character. i hope Inuyasha just submits to Sesshoumaru before things go out of hand....i know that if i was writing this story, something very terrible would happen....anyways great chapter and i think i understand why you put the Goshinboku as Inuyasha's mark on Sesshoumaru...great chapter as usual and update when you can!!

ichie-chan
person Anon
schedule May 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...I have to agree with Inuyasha's human side. Why submit to a cold blooded bastxxd? I know that Sesshoumaru has this persona to keep up and all, but if he can't trust his mate, then he's just hopeless. Inuyasha deserves much more than just submitting to his youkai side and being a slave to Sesshoumaru's every whim. I truly feel bad for Inuyasha. He has truly suffered in his youth, why must he suffer even with his mate. I can understand the alpha male thing with Sesshoumaru, but he could at least be more considerate of Inuyasha's choices. Insults after insults are just demeaning, and for someone with a strong will like Inuyasha...there is always a breaking point. And it seems he has reached his.

I totally love your story, the drama is fantastic. I don't wish for Sesshoumaru to change, but there has to be compromises right. I guess I have a soft spot for Inuyasha.

I hope that Inuyasha is going to be fine. But still think that Inuyasha should not lean his choice toward his youkai side. He has to have some pride right?

Why the hell does Inuyasha have to relent each time. I especially wanted to bash sesshoumaru's head in when he insulted the mating mark that Inuyasha made on his back. That tree was an important part of Inuyasha's life. lol

INUYASHA!!!!!!! INUYASHA!!!!!!
YOSH! GO INUYASHA....SHOW THAT BASTXXD!!!!

TAKE THAT SESSHOUMARU!!!!!!

LOL...DEMENTED...DISTURBED....I KNOW...LOL....>>>AND PROUD OF IT....LOL

100% IN MY GREATEST STORY RATE!!!!
person Fluffy
schedule May 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmpht! I'm with his human side....Sesshoumaru is being an ass...But then again...He's just being himself....I admit that and i love him! XD'
person nette
schedule May 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was nice. i can actually see the images and can't wait to read the next chapter.
person acr
schedule May 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Though I'm waiting for Inuyasha to throw a major temper tantrum. Sorry, I think sesshomaru's having too easy a time. :)
person nette
schedule May 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i luv it. keep up the good work. i especially like how you go back and forth with how they think and whatnot. can't wait to read the next chapters.
person Supi-Chan1026
schedule May 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was great.
Not to mention that i love authors who know their stuff/do research.
kudos to you!

can't wait for the next chapter, update soon!

-Courtney
person acr
schedule May 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. though I hope Inuyasha gives Sesshomaru a whole lot of crap!
person acr
schedule May 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter. Poor inuyasha.