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for The Prophecy

by mshutts

person MerelyTruth
schedule June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello ! I'm a french mother of three daughters and we all loves manga's characters, especially Inuyasha and Sesshomaru. (Sorry for my english !!!)

I discovered yaoi stories and appreciated this special way of love. In your story, which is wonderfully different than others, I may say that you describe very well a very special relation between these two. Poor men !!! The path is hard and long to fully understand (and hopefully love ?) each other... Their thoughts are so ... delicious, I'm glad to read your written. Thank you very much, I can't wait to know how the poor Inuyasha will leave his prison !
Friendly, with "bons baisers de la France",

Merely Truth
person Lady Date
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You evil, evil person. You would leave it there. Please update soon, the suspence is killing me!!
person nette
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was intersting. i liked the fact you had inu explain his situation to his brother and that his two sides were fighting, i could actually see that. update soon
person acr
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter. NOW I understand why the two sides are fighting.
person acr
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Glad we're moving along.
person acr
schedule May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. You have a tendency to write too much introspection for the characters, though. Trying showing us how they are feeling through their actions. Also, the way you often re-tell events from several perspectives makes the story drag a bit. I really like your plot, and I'm liking the way you are showing Kagome so far. She is a kind person, but also immature and a bit to prone to using 'sit'.
person nette
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thank goodness you updated, i thought i'd have to wait forever. good chapter now i can't wait for the gang to get their especially kagome. it's gonna be crazy. so hurry, please.
person Karen
schedule May 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woo! great story so far. I really love all these kinda primitive instincts take over plots that some people tend to do.
person nette
schedule May 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i liked this chapter, we finally get to see and hear wat is bothering inuyasha and how he feels on the subject of being sessh's mate. i liked the way you did it. can't wait for next chapter. keep it up.
schedule May 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
IT'S ME AGAIN DEMENTED READER! LOL

Anyways...love the new post. Sesshoumaru is confused....I guess he always assumes that Inuyasha is at fault and he as the alpha male is right at every turn.

hmmmm.....oh well....it wouldn't be interesting without the drama right?

Love it!