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for The Prophecy

by mshutts

person Silence
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my God!! You updated!! I was so afraid that you'd abandoned the story and it is currently my absolute favorite continuation. I loved getting everyone's point of view on what they thought was happening. Who could have known there could be so many different perspectives of the same event. And they're all wrong-except Shippou, who seems to have a pretty good idea what's happening.

In any case, I'm still worried about the damage Myouga is going to cause. And now Sesshoumaru is out of commission to handle any damage control to Inuyasha's psyche about why Sesshoumaru would mate with him. Hopefully, everything will work out and they will live happily ever after. That's my vote anyway.

Again thank you so much for continuing you're beautiful story, and if you're so worried about everyone's reaction to Kikyou, catch up with the manga. Major things happening there.

Thanx,
~Silence~
person The w00t Girl
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see that you've updated the story, it went good, kind of on the boring/dragging it out side, near the end at least but nonetheless, it was still good and hope to see an update soon.
person acr
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree with you. Though I don't like Kikyo, the flashback episodes with her are my favorites, because we actually see a glimpse of what Inuyasha's life must have been like, and how lonely he must have been.
person nette
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i thought you left this story alone. it was getting good and you dissapeared. but i'm glad you're back and finally updated. i hope the gang won't do anything dumb, especially kagome. that's all inu needs is for his friends to get hurt because they were too nosey. anyway can't wait to read more and hope next chapter will conatin some sesshy/inu moments. ok im done.
person moon_maiden/ inufangirl007
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! YOUR ALIVE!!! i was wondering where u went...great chapter, i really liked the way the group made their own concluions of whats happing, it'll make it more fun when they find out the truth ^^ can't wait to read more so please update soon!!
person Snowfall
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So, there was turmoil taking place elsewhere in the palace, eh? Inuyasha's friends must be making quite a stir. I hope that you make them three dimensional in their actions, thoughts, speech...and stuff; as opposed to what is often stereotypical in fics. Sesshoumaru's behavior was quite sweet. I do hope that he actually learned something and is able to truly change his behavior toward Inuyasha. And there is still that damn rosary to think about. I really do wonder what is draining Inuyasha's youkai. I have a guess, but I'm probably way off. I'm really anxious to see how his friends respond. Oooh, and that boogie man is still out there. So many things going on that Inuyasha is completely unaware of. Will the human half of him gain the mark now? Or will they have to have some other ritual? Just thoughts running through my head.

Well, I anxiously await your next chapter.

Snowfall
person Melissa
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please right more. This is the best InuYasha fanfic I have read so far and BELIEVE ME that is saying something. You have done an amasing job with this story. I love it. Please Please (by the way this it the first review i have ever made because i couldn't find a story to deem worthy enough until now) Please write more.
person wendyghost
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yep, i forgot all about them! sessy and inu are just to sexy together!
person VDHerry
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this story.
It's not like the other Inu/Sess mating stories I've read.
And I love how you have Shippo think of Inuyasha as his father.
I can't wait to see how Kagome and them react.
person D/H
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How can one forgot that bitch!!!

Anyway, the ONE thing i hate about Inu/Sess stories are how hateful and annoying Kagome is..ALL
authors and when i say ALL, i mean, ALL the authors protray her that way, always getting what she wants and
always 'sitting' Inuyasha and him not being able to do a damn thing about it..I see your story is the same thing and
that's oone of the reasons why i STOPPED reading this story of yours, a year ago..I just hate the fact that authors protray her
that way but don't solve the problem, like, fucking have Inu or Sess, freaking tell her off, or just damn right KILL her off!!

I just hate her soo much and you're also not doing a damn thing about her, and it seems as thou you're also avoid it, don't know why.
Why is all the stories like that, having her sit him, and stuff like that, just becuz the bitch couldn't have her way..I only read 1, where Inu
actually almost choked her becuz of it and that felt GREAT too read..Well, he was older and stuff with kids but that was a great story, still is, but
not finished, and i doubt it'll ever be finished..

Why are you and MANY authors avoiding this problem(Kagome) and her stupid 'sitting' thing???If you think it makes it more intersting or
whatever, it's just not good reading and is making me want to stop reading this fic,..


So, lasting, what you going to do about it???