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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh this story is wonderful!!! Can't wait for another chapter, so update!!!!!
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories ive read on this website. I really like how you write this story and how you bring out your main carectors to seem so real and their personalitys to be very strong, emotionally moving (to me), and very real. I really hope that you finish this story and update as soon as you can. :)
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It has to be one of the best in this fandom that I have read. Please do continue it!!!! b
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. that pretty much sums it up lol. i love what u've done. update update update. well...... what are waiting for?
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, nice to meet you. My name is Shirohane and I wanted to tell you how much pleasure I received from reading your story. Truth be told, I'm not a big fan of Inu Yasha and I do not have a deep background information on the original work itself, nor know much about the characters. But even with my limited knowledge it was amazing how in character everyone was, and how a lot of the storyline itself seemed to reflect the original story. You do an especially lovely job with the two main characters, Inu Yasha and Sesshoumaru. It's interesting how they are both rough and have trouble with expressing their feelings outside, but inside they are kinder and sweeter than anyone else.
I liked how you developed the story as well. You did not rush their relationship, and slowly wove the tale of how their feelings for each other grew over time. It was believable and extremely well-written. I could truly absorb myself into the story without feeling, well, someone rushing me along when I'm not ready to move yet. I liked how you used multiple points of view to express one situation; e.g., I could see the story in Inu's point of view, then in Sesshou's point of view. That cleared up quite few things and their respective emotions were well-coveyed.
The entire idea of demon/halfling demon mating is overused, but you wrote it so that it seems fresh and completely new. Not only is this a story about Inu and Sesshou's developing relationship, but also about how people around them react to the two and there is a bigger picture encompassing everything--what is Inu Yasha's true powers, and what will the two's relationship result in the long run? How will Inu and Sesshou handle the new troubles that are overshadowing their lives?
Overall I am completely enchanted with this story and I hope to see a litter of beautiful puppies soon. (Ganbare, Sesshou-chan. *warai*) I drew an illustration for you. Take a deep breath and approach with caution, because I do not have an ounce of talent and what you see may rot your eyes. (Hahaha;;)
http://s5.photobucket.com/albums/y175/hiirowing/IY_Prophecy.jpg
If this site somehow does not allow html codes to be displayed in reviews, please e-mail me or visit my website for the picture. (http colon double slash shirohane dot co dot nr ) Thank you for the lovely story. :D
P.S. I agree with you whole-heartedly on one issue. If no one would write the kind of story you want to read, you have no choice but to write it yourself... TvT;;;;
I liked how you developed the story as well. You did not rush their relationship, and slowly wove the tale of how their feelings for each other grew over time. It was believable and extremely well-written. I could truly absorb myself into the story without feeling, well, someone rushing me along when I'm not ready to move yet. I liked how you used multiple points of view to express one situation; e.g., I could see the story in Inu's point of view, then in Sesshou's point of view. That cleared up quite few things and their respective emotions were well-coveyed.
The entire idea of demon/halfling demon mating is overused, but you wrote it so that it seems fresh and completely new. Not only is this a story about Inu and Sesshou's developing relationship, but also about how people around them react to the two and there is a bigger picture encompassing everything--what is Inu Yasha's true powers, and what will the two's relationship result in the long run? How will Inu and Sesshou handle the new troubles that are overshadowing their lives?
Overall I am completely enchanted with this story and I hope to see a litter of beautiful puppies soon. (Ganbare, Sesshou-chan. *warai*) I drew an illustration for you. Take a deep breath and approach with caution, because I do not have an ounce of talent and what you see may rot your eyes. (Hahaha;;)
http://s5.photobucket.com/albums/y175/hiirowing/IY_Prophecy.jpg
If this site somehow does not allow html codes to be displayed in reviews, please e-mail me or visit my website for the picture. (http colon double slash shirohane dot co dot nr ) Thank you for the lovely story. :D
P.S. I agree with you whole-heartedly on one issue. If no one would write the kind of story you want to read, you have no choice but to write it yourself... TvT;;;;
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah so nicceee! Update again soon! Please!!
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice, verrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyy nice job. I enjoyed this chapter eminsily. I look forward to the next update whenever it may be. Don't forget your readers on MM.org k? Thanks.
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much, it's the only reason I'm into inuyasha fanfiction. And this chapter turned out just how I thought it would, I'm so happy! Great work!!
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww... I like. This was a good chapter. I especially like how Myoga decided not to interfere. Somehow I don't think the rest of the gang is gonna be so understanding.
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hurray! you updated. it was once again
a wonderfully done chapter. i want to
see what the others will do also when
they find out. oh yeah, you never
explained the significane of the
tree as sesshomaru's mating mark. why
did he have that mark. i can understand
the mark on inuyasha's back. but the one
on sesshomaru's back is a mystery. will you
explain that later on in the story?
oh well, nothing i can do now except
wait with bated breath until the next chapter.
a wonderfully done chapter. i want to
see what the others will do also when
they find out. oh yeah, you never
explained the significane of the
tree as sesshomaru's mating mark. why
did he have that mark. i can understand
the mark on inuyasha's back. but the one
on sesshomaru's back is a mystery. will you
explain that later on in the story?
oh well, nothing i can do now except
wait with bated breath until the next chapter.