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for The Prophecy

by mshutts

person Anon
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehe I can quit my whining now......very satisfying resolution to the sitting! I kinda figured Shippo was going to start having more of a role now, as well. As always, will be waiting for the next update!
person Tricia
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE ur story-please tell me that ur going to finish it--I wanna know if Inu is going to have pups or not and how will they resolve all their issues? Please continue !! It's awesome!
person jenny
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating. I love this fic.
Cant wait for more.
person wendyghost
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor inuyasha!
person chibifae
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
u have to update this soon and often. Is Sessy gonna put Kagome in her place? I hope so.
person PurinsuArashi
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Freaking sweet! You came back! Goddess, I have missed you!
Great chapter, highly impressed. I'v been waiting for a while here for ya, ill be herer till the very end. =3
I hope things are going well for you. Keep up the great work!

Thank so much for your update!

Storm
person DemonGoddess061
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dang it! Too short too short too short!!!

hehe

Well, I think that Sess will not kill her. At least not yet....if ever....^-^.

..errrmmm... Sturaki to the rescue maybe in next chapter? After all, she has much to teach Inu about his newly forming powers. Not to mention she seemed more than a little annoyed (but understanding at the same time) at some of Kagome's behavior while they were travelling together.
person Sekre
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eep, Kagome better run :3
person Snowfall
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Another chappie! Oh wow! *fangirly squeal* Inuyasha is finally feeling secure and loved! It was absolutely heartwarming when Sesshoumaru asked for Inuyasha's help and the affection that he showed. He seems to be learning rather quickly. Was it everything that Inuyasha told him while they were in Inuyasha's head? I was glad to see Sesshoumaru being so well behaved. Inuyasha's reaction was simply precious. *warm fuzzies and hugs self* Inuyasha's worry over his friends was very believable and you expressed it very well. He was very much in character. Excellent!

Oh! Inuyasha never passes out when Kagome sits him! Nice cliffie! I love action and cliffies and that was just what was needed. Some people hate them, but I like not knowing what is going to happen next. It makes for a much more interesting story.

Also, a chapter this length is perfectly fine if it has this much progression and means quicker updates. ^_^

Snow
person MewMew2
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you very much for updating. I await your next and congradulate you on your writing so far.