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Aaaw! This chapter was so sweet! Thanks for the update as a present! I hope you have a great and a safe holiday too! I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

Great chapter. One of the things that I have really enjoyed about this whole story is how you will trade off POVs and give us a completely different view of the same situation. This chapter is another great example of this. I know that you said that it was rather hard to write, but the first part was great. I look forward to reading more, and thanks for sharing with us!

Caitriona

happy holidays to you too. and I hope they get better -

thank you for updating - i was telling myself that she might...
so i'm glad you did.

this is the nice. i'm glad Sess is doing the alpha things,,,,
the only thing i missed here is Sess's POV

So, Shippo problem solved....
I'm thinking when your twist would arrive..
and i'm hoping it will COME after Sess and Inu bond some more =)
i dont know if the loss you've hinted is the loss of pup(s)
as they battle this entropy monster (well, i didnt know what to call it)
that Kurasko was talking about...

that would be quite angsty....

I really like your POV shifts!!
Thanks for updating.....
I check this site everyday just to make sure i dont miss any updates

please, update soon!!

i finished to read this 50 chapters [49, in reallity] in one day [more like 6hours]


my review: goood!! and very interesting

and sad for shippo... but, i hope he will understand that inu is going to keep him as his and sesshy's pup!

hmmm. you havent updated since i last saw the chapter.
life gets in the way, sometimes. *sigh*
i didnt know the reader could also read the reviews... until today

i wanted to make a review when you updated but since it might take a while
i thought i better
you write introspections very well.
i like the way you shift your pov's. indeed, what one person thinks and says
and what another person hears and thinks can be totally at odds.

wonderful fic. i hope you find the time to update.
you do leave hints in your story.
for example, as early as chapter ... 1 or is 2 - sess up with the seer
it is clear that somewhere in the story future,
a dreadful foe will rise and it will be sess and his mate who will see it through
a bit of me is worried that one of the inu pups will most likely die
--- well, that was the foretelling, wasnt it?
and you as author can certainly foretell the future =)

snowfall (hanyou slave) also recommended your fic to me
i was already reading it - i've read each story on this section
but yours is one of those i re-read a lot (snowfall's i also re-read)
so it's one of those special fics in my special collection =)

i have no issues with the points you've raised about inuyasha
the sensing, few people praise him, etc.
and even his attitude.
he IS a softy. a very strong softy.
sess, in his own inimitable way is another softy
for the right person, and the right thing, a terrible softy

i laugh at the drunken encounter... and i enjoy going back and forth
the brother's povs.... sess not exactly knowing what he is saying
and inu not believing what he is seeing - and inu has my sympathy

and everytime i see the phrase inu tucked in sess
i have this vivid image of him in exactly that way

i should check your author profile and see your other fics
it might be an eye opener (i cant believe i hadnt thought of that sooner!)

at any rate, i am enjoying your story, and wishing you happy holidays!

I must say this is quite interesting...
Inuyasha is seeminlgy still a bit in character. Sesshoumarou... well he... umm... it's fine. The plot works out everything.

Agh! you finally continued it!

Oh please PLEASE update soooooon.

Great story. I'm sooo glad Sesshomaru and Inuyasha are getting along now. I hope the have 'pups' soon...that would be so exciting!!!!! ^_^ I can't wait for more, so update soon pleae!!

Amazing...I never really thought of Inu/Sesshoumaru as a slash pair , but now, its a new pair I am obsessed with, all thanks to you ^_^ I love Sesshoumaru ( cold ,calm and calculating) . Please, please continue it...I am now entirely rabid about it . Hurry up and update it ?
Thanks for taking the time to write it ,by the way.

I was pleased that you had more events take place in this chapter than in previous chapters. There is the very positive reaction of Sesshoumaru when Inuyasha ties his obie. It was sweet that he focused on Inuyasha’s effort rather than the outcome. Then we have a refreshing view of Inuyasha’s typical behavior and Kagome’s usual sit. We get to see Sesshoumaru have the opportunity to attack someone. LOL I was glad to see you continue to use Sturaki. It was funny that Miroku had to hold her up and then the domino affect knocking all three of them down. We see Sesshoumaru protectively take care of Inuyasha in front of the others. Getting the rabbits was very thoughtful of him. Poor Shippou. Considering his feelings was a stroke of genius. Sesshoumaru trailing out after Inuyasha in search of Shippou left me wondering what part Sesshoumaru is going to take in soothing the kit. Sango and Miroku’s questions and Sturaki’s headache was quite humorous.

I’m proud of you for putting so many events into one chapter. It’s unusual. Sorry it took so long to review. Every once in awhile, an author will put up a chapter that requires that I take some time to really think quite a bit before I can articulate a response. I don’t know what causes that.

Great chapter! Well written as always.

Snowfall