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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
up-date soon.
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April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a very touchy story, you made fantastic dialogue of the two brothers, both very realistic and suits them well, i like how a little twist and turns you made it is really outstanding i couldn't stop reading, it is so addictive. anyway hopefully you would continue this wonderful story, you have an amazing way to telling your story...
Rain..
Rain..
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I'm always happy to run across another chapter for your story. Though the end seems so far away! Which isn't a bad thing either. I'm just impatient. (^_^') Congrats on the baby boy! Hope he is happy and healthy!
And Hey-Ho! You'll have plenty of inspiration for when the time comes to give Inu and Sess their pups!
\(^_^)/ Waiting anxiously and with faith, Kyoki
And Hey-Ho! You'll have plenty of inspiration for when the time comes to give Inu and Sess their pups!
\(^_^)/ Waiting anxiously and with faith, Kyoki
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I get so much entertainment out of this fic. I love the way it's written and how the plot is developing. KUDOS!
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG,I love how protective Sesshomaru is of Inuyasha. Please update soon.:)
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March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story!!! i have not finshed reading it yet but so far i cant get enough of it!!
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully beautiful story. And I find it absolutely amazing how you are able to keep the characters "in character" so well. Most writers would have veered so far from the original personalities at this point they could almost name the characters completely differently. One point of suggestion is that when switching views to not alway go all the way back to where you last left of with a character, especially if we've already seen that character's reactions from the point of view of another. While still good story it tends to slow the momentum of the story. A short rehashing of the character's reactions of the previous chapter would work great but to completely go back a few scenes can be a little confusing sometimes.
Keep up the wonderful work and good luck with the kids! Hopefully even with as wonderful as they are they leave some time for you!
Keep up the wonderful work and good luck with the kids! Hopefully even with as wonderful as they are they leave some time for you!
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! You use details from the anime... XD I hope you get to the next update soon...
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story is fantastic! All 53 chapters of it :)
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December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:-D
I'm SO glad this got updated! I had almost given up hope!
I sat down, started back on chapter one (it'd been a while since my last read-run), and read the whole thing again. Worth the wait, and I can't wait for more. Take all the time you need---we'll be waiting for ya, heh.
I'm SO glad this got updated! I had almost given up hope!
I sat down, started back on chapter one (it'd been a while since my last read-run), and read the whole thing again. Worth the wait, and I can't wait for more. Take all the time you need---we'll be waiting for ya, heh.