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April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thia addition was so good. I love your Sesshormaru he is so balanced now with his feelings for his mate.
Really a wonderful read.
Really a wonderful read.
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April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved the new chapter! I can think of two possible uses for those beads...one is vengeance on Kagome...the other is a more naughty naughty use for them. :-O
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!
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April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love you put it on her! let her go to the floor. who do she think she is to keep inuyasha in like what is he her slave. she need to know some really guilt, how dumb can she be. hell kill her. well I'm please that you had so much fun writing this I had fun reading it. time for her to truly suffer and time for inuyasha to stop treating her as some baby she does a lot of crap to and she no better than kikyou that might give her a kick. god i hate kagome. can't wait for the need update bye and thank you.
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April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
its a pleasure to read! an i wait for ur updates with excitment!
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April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Against the law? But then I wouldn't get to have so much fun reading it. Poor Inuyasha, he must be so upset knowing that's what Kagome thinks. Keeping him in line, Sesshomaru has the excuse of his insticts forcing such thoughts but her? I think the beads should be put on her and we'll see how much she likes to be 'kept in line'. I wonder if being put into the ground that way would kill her?
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April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow I love this story!
You definitely have a talent for writing... I love how much you've put into making this story as in-character as possible, it shows the work of a true writer. You pay homage to the characters and the original creator of these characters while still using them in a completely believable way.
Please keep writing! I look forward to your next chapers!
- Bailey B.
You definitely have a talent for writing... I love how much you've put into making this story as in-character as possible, it shows the work of a true writer. You pay homage to the characters and the original creator of these characters while still using them in a completely believable way.
Please keep writing! I look forward to your next chapers!
- Bailey B.
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April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh so very good . I want more and what is going to happen next?
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April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! An update, I'm just thrilled to pieces...
And I have to admit that I simply loved Sesshoumaru in this lastest chapter. I thought for sure that Kagome was going to a real bitch and flat out tell the youkai lord no and not remove the beads. She was smart in granting his simple but demanding request. I love it!
Excllent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm sure that Kagome will have plenty to say about how she was man handled by Sesshoumaru. I do feel bad for Inuyasha though. How could Kagome say 'keep you in line' like he is some dog, regardless of his bloodline and demon species. She had no right whatsoever to say that or even try to control Inuyasha's behavior just to suit her when Kagome doesn't like what he says or does.
Please update soon!
Nemesis ^_~
And I have to admit that I simply loved Sesshoumaru in this lastest chapter. I thought for sure that Kagome was going to a real bitch and flat out tell the youkai lord no and not remove the beads. She was smart in granting his simple but demanding request. I love it!
Excllent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm sure that Kagome will have plenty to say about how she was man handled by Sesshoumaru. I do feel bad for Inuyasha though. How could Kagome say 'keep you in line' like he is some dog, regardless of his bloodline and demon species. She had no right whatsoever to say that or even try to control Inuyasha's behavior just to suit her when Kagome doesn't like what he says or does.
Please update soon!
Nemesis ^_~
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April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
exquisite story... really pulls you in. can't wait to see more from you!
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April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm reviewing for the first time because I just found this story not to long ago and I am in love with it...You are completly awesome and this story is everything I could personally ask for in a Inu/Sess fic...thank you so much for conintuing to write such an well thought out and enjoyable read. I will wait in gleeful anticipation of the next chapter. And I especially love the idea of Kags gettin taught a harsh lessen...(Sorry, not a Kags fan)...Thanks again for a wonderful story.