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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written! It seems that Sesshoumaru doesn't realize that he's pretty much sealed his own fate with Miroku. Silly dog. But yeah, this really was great, my dear. I'm never disappointed in your work! Can't wait for the update. Bravo!
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was quite a intense chapter! I was not expecting what happened.
Love the name of the chapter... wonder why? :)--Again loved the way you wrote what Sesshoumaru was thinking. Wonderfully written! I would definitely read the partner fiction to this piece.
Hope to see more soon!--Thank you!
~Tainted~
Love the name of the chapter... wonder why? :)--Again loved the way you wrote what Sesshoumaru was thinking. Wonderfully written! I would definitely read the partner fiction to this piece.
Hope to see more soon!--Thank you!
~Tainted~
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm reasonably certain I've mentioned this before, but it's a point that I find quite important: great, fantastic, SMASHING job of keeping things canon. You've taken these characters and given them your own twist withOUT making it horrifically OOC or otherwise farfetched. Also, your character development ROCKS! I wish I could write action like you do. Keep up the good work!
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How nice it is to read something that is so well written! Again in first person, which you do beautifully.
You ended on a hell of a cliffy! I will wear rock climbing gear next time, as I will need to climb back up the cliffs.
Keep up the good work!
~Tainted~
You ended on a hell of a cliffy! I will wear rock climbing gear next time, as I will need to climb back up the cliffs.
Keep up the good work!
~Tainted~
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Give any man Miroku's age 10-15 minutes and they can go again without a problem.
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June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was hot AND it had a plot and developing characters and theme. yays. I'm gonna be dreaming constantly about the next chapter until it comes out.
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June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! that was... wow! Update soon.
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June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful job on chapter 2... I enjoyed it as much as Chapter 1. I felt like I was in Sesshoumaru's mind listening/watching his inner thoughts. Again- you do a wonderful job with first person. Beautiful writing.! Thank you!
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May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very well written, you made me like this pairing and believe that Sess. could feel this way. I hope you write more of this fic or at least of this pairing. Would be lovely to know what's going on through Miroku's head at the same time.
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please please finish this story it is really getting good I feel really sorry for Shessy I wish there was some way he could have Miroku and them have kids come on your are the writer yah know make with the magice lol please continue this great story......