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for Breaking of A "True" Heart

by DaughterofNyght

person wynter89
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how could you. it was geting interesting. i loved it. i cant wait for another chapter.

good luck
may kami-sama be with you
person Lakiesha
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi that was a great story please finish and good luck on your surgery get well soon.
person inuyoukai8
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH OH OH! Damn writer's block! I hope you update soon. I know I'm one to talk, I feel it too LoL
person Roses
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very berry good, who cares how you name Sesshomaru the point is its a great story and it diverts you from such a minor point. Keep up the good work and update soon.
person purp1ebabe
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woah i dint really expect naraku... where's sessh?
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update!! I think I've already mentioned that I love this story! I really hope that Sess is in love with Kagome...lol because if not, than he's being a total jerk. Anyways, great update, please post more SOON!!

~Sonya
person LordFluffysMate
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you said you needed a beta right? well come and get me...... i love your fanfic so far and can't wait for you to update so if you need a beta to help out i'm free so E-mail me and send me you SN if you have AIm or AOL .... Ja Mata Ne .
person midnighttimberwolf
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dang that was a short chapter but good.... I loved it... Oh don't mind some of the reviewers they mean well (most of them) we all cannot be perfect like them anyways you are right about Sesshoumaru's name in romanji though it still looks much better with the maru. Again love the story you should re-read the last chapter I believe you left out a word which one I didn't note but when do take a look as I said before we are not perfect including me.
person Tori
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just wanted to say that I really enjoy this story. It's actually one of the best that I've read in a while, and I'm hoping that you won't let criticism of a few minor grammatical errors discourage you from writting more. I can't wait to see another update!
person Kels
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry about the people who comment about spelling. I know what you mean, you know what you mean. Its probably a slip of the fingers on a keyboard, thats my problem. Some people are just too anal for his or her own good. These stories are just for fun and to entertain others. Keep up the good work.