rate_review Reviews

Great story.

Can't wait to see how Sesshomaru reacts to Sango being gone.

Excellent storyline. Nice build up and character development. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for updating so regularly. - Side question. - Does Sess have two arms or one?
Cheers!

Exciting chapter. Well written and suspenseful. Can't wait to see what happens with the battle and the feast and who Sesshomaru will pick as mate - although I'm having my own ideas as to what may happen... Love how Sesshomaru was in his true form at the beginning of the feast, it seems to me many people forget that he has that side, and besides he's just awesome as a huge dog :P So anyway, love the story, keep it uuuppp!

hey this interesting...can't wait for your next update

OMFG!!!!! update pleeeeaaaassseeee! i love this story

Once again another great chapter and insight into the characters motives. You are doing wonderful wiriting this story!

Your story has been entertaining so far; it's not often that I find a fic that takes the relationship between Sesshomaru and Sango seriously. I can see how hard you're trying to keep the character's in balance. For Sesshomaru he's the arrogant demon lord but you also go to great lengths to show the softer side of him. The same goes for Sango showing that vulnerable part of herself. For the most part you do a good job with this, though Sango's reaction to Sesshomaru taking a mate (and an already decided one) I didn't quite believe the way she acted. Of course she's hurt and a part of her knew this would happen, but she's completely surprised. The way she calls him a monster, it just came off as childish and over-the-top. If you toned the scene down a bit and focused more on how hurt she's in - that internal conflict which I felt was lacking. Sesshomaru's last words were great though. It fit him well.

- LtSonya

Damn....chapter 11 was harsh...Sessy could be so cold at times...but I love it all the say...Keep up the good writing.

=( i dont think i like sesshomaru any more I LOVE THE STORY!!!! but he's a mr. jerky pants!!! =)

OMG! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!