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You can't sic Sess on me. He's a bit tied up at the moment. I love your fic. Is Kohaku going to make an entrance? Or is he dead? Ohhh. Is the baby a boy or girl? Is Sess going to find Sango? Or will Sango go demony slayer on their cabooses? Next chapter soon. Or I'll sic my Inu on you. Deal?

You have a very inciting story here, I do like it very much. Your characters are really well done. I just read this from begging to end, it has been very vivid. I just couldn't stop reading it, I do look forward until your next chapter.

Chanda

Author here. I need to respond to Mr. Shiznit's comments. I am sorry that you find the story is moving too slow for you, but I must disagree that the chapters are not advancing the plot. Every scene that I write is done for a specific narrative purpose. Things may seem slow at the moment, but trust that there is a method to the madness. As for your charge that I update once a week ''if that'' you say, I must point out that the first eighteen chapters of this story were posted on an average of once every two to three days; recent life events have required that I limit my writing to a more realistic schedule. I am now posting once a week on Fridays.

Thanks to all of my reviewers for your kind and encouraging comments. Writers like me live on reviews, and they are like fresh air. It has been a pleasure so far taking this journey with you, and I hope everyone will stay to the end. -- PinkRoseBouquet.

Hey! Great updates, I am so on edge about Sango! Please, please update soon

since you want reveiw here it is. your're story is interesting and i like it but it is moving to slow. you have chapter that don't advance the story. those chapters are fine if you update 3 or 4 chapter at a time but you update once a week if that. My advice is that you spped up your updating because youwill lose a lot of readers if you do not update, but that is the only problem the story is great. just update more!!!!!!!!!!

I am enjoying your story very much. Very detailed, with strong character development. You are very good at showing us the individual emotional struggles all are experiencing, through their eyes. You have kept a believable timeline and pace to the ensuing battle. A good mix of intrigue and romance, etc.........in short I have printed this off at work so that I can read it at home, a most enjoyable story. I look forward to reading more from you.

great job so far.update soon k? ^_^

Uh oh...what has Sango gotten herself into? I hope Sesshoumaru saves her! The suspence is killing me, please try to update ASAP, I just love this story!

more soon? please?

Yes we're reading. i really like this story and am happy about the 14 chapters i have still to read. your language is very good and the story is obviously (hopefully) going places